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tylor2000

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Ghost town
« on: March 25, 2004, 04:58:57 pm »
Upon my skin blows the wind
But nothing like your touch
Endless years the wind blows by
In the desert there is not much
Your ghost lives within me
but my skin is empty
Ghost town is my heart
In my skin blows sagebrush
on empty ranges
where everything is parched

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« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2004, 10:55:43 am »
Wow Tylor that is so good!! Nice job!

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Thank so much for the sig Scotty!! <3 It's gorgeous!

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« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2004, 12:49:02 pm »
Great =)
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« Reply #3 on: March 26, 2004, 01:25:00 pm »
wickedly cool  8)

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« Reply #4 on: March 26, 2004, 08:16:28 pm »
Thanks guys.  It's not directed at any particular woman.  I live in the desert in what is considered the old west with ghost towns and such.  Basically Nevada.  I was trying to come up with a poem that related on how I felt and fit the landscape around me.  I thought of ghost towns and thought it fit well.  I once wrote a poem situated in a pine forest to a woman I once knew, but I don't remember it off hand.  So I'm kinda good at those kind of lyrical poems.

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