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Title: afternoons
Post by: snapple936 on July 09, 2004, 04:09:53 pm: there's a little bit of me still wedged
in between your walls, the seats of your car
reminders of those afternoons with our sunglasses
and lazy naps lulled by the rain

but let it stream by you
this passage of time is not as easy to grasp
as the picture frames that we left behind
and everybody knows what this feels like
this is freedom, this is hard, this is nothing we'd want to do again

and i admit that there's still a bit of you
an ounce of you in my mind
when i play the counting crows and when i lay in bed
and when the phone rings i pretend
sometimes i pretend that you're calling me again
Title: afternoons
Post by: LimeTwister on July 09, 2004, 07:47:40 pm: I love it.
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Post by: PIBby on July 09, 2004, 08:04:45 pm: OH MY GOD.

That last bit made my heart stop! Like, when I listened to This Brilliant Dance the first time. Or Konstantine.

That was incredibly good, Kelley. And I'm not even joking.

Kudos. Kudos. Kudos.
Title: afternoons
Post by: snapple936 on July 09, 2004, 08:34:25 pm: thanks guys... i don't even know why i posted it. kinda a whim thing. cece you make my day!!!!!!!!!!

kelley
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Post by: PIBby on July 09, 2004, 08:35:28 pm: NO.

That was SO good.
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Post by: Tia on July 10, 2004, 03:08:15 am: Awesome! Amazing! Brilliant!!
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Post by: snapple936 on July 10, 2004, 09:04:41 am: thank you so much!!!!

kelley
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Post by: Tia on July 10, 2004, 09:18:23 am: De nada <3
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Post by: drumpad on July 10, 2004, 07:59:15 pm: it's pimp

I reall like it.
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Post by: snapple936 on July 10, 2004, 08:36:08 pm: you're pimp.
and sometimes i really like you!

kelley

EDIT- see how i totally switched that around on you? haha
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Post by: drumpad on July 11, 2004, 06:20:45 pm: just sometimes? :?
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Post by: Jophess on July 12, 2004, 08:02:21 am: Very nicely done!
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Post by: PIBby on July 16, 2004, 05:57:54 pm: I'm still in awe, Kelley. Seriously.
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Post by: snapple936 on July 17, 2004, 02:04:56 pm: all the time corey, all the time :-)

and cece, thanks so much. you made everyday a happy one!!!!!1 hahahah and thanks for the pm.
Title: afternoons
Post by: PIBby on July 17, 2004, 02:08:56 pm: You're welcome! We need to write our BOOK! About nooks! And cooks! And looks! And hooks! And . . . :\
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Post by: snapple936 on July 17, 2004, 02:18:58 pm: CROOKS!!!
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Post by: PIBby on July 17, 2004, 02:24:12 pm: JOOKS!
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Post by: snapple936 on July 19, 2004, 01:31:57 pm: what the FREAK are jooks??!?!
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Post by: PIBby on July 19, 2004, 02:15:50 pm: You KNOW!

The things they use to make oranges into pineapples!
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Post by: snapple936 on July 19, 2004, 02:42:53 pm: oooooh
it's all clear now

you're a dork ;-)
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Post by: PIBby on July 19, 2004, 03:25:52 pm: You're from Connecticut. :P