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My Usual Places (poem)
« on: January 11, 2005, 03:51:23 am »
I'll be in my Usual Places
Singing the songs Ive always sang
I'll be in the usual Places
you can find me there on days like these,
on days where I feel so alone
I'll be where I have always been
Right TherE in Your StuPid LitTle HeaRt
I'll be crying in the corner
SLAP a band-aid on me & heal me UP
Don't bother me
I'll be where I am on days That end in "Y"

Stephanie 01/05
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My Usual Places (poem)
« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2005, 04:57:15 am »
Hmm... I liked it, but it's just too short...
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« Reply #2 on: January 12, 2005, 03:39:18 pm »
short but efficient in a gentle way :wink:

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SLAP a band-aid on me & heal me UP
Don't bother me
I'll be where I am on days That end in "Y"

^my fav part :D
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« Reply #3 on: January 15, 2005, 01:56:39 am »
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« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2005, 09:33:39 pm »
I like it!
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« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2005, 07:50:21 am »
I really like this poem.  Good job.
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