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Other Topics => Creative Endeavors => Topic started by: Tiger Baby on June 03, 2003, 01:59:18 pm
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She ran through the forest
Never to stop
Leaves crunching beneath her feet
Her dress torn at the ends
Her arms and legs scratched
There was nowhere for her to go
She was lost
All of the towns people searching for her
None could find her
She had vanished
No sign left of her whereabouts
She didn't want to be found
She kept running
Her legs gave way
She fell
She hit the dirt
She dragged herself under a tree
She sat there for who knows how long
Was she there a day?
A week?
A month?
She hadn't moved from the spot
She sat...thinking
Should she go back?
Should she stay?
She was lost
no one had found her yet
Still in the same spot, she died a slow death
Slowly she left our world
Her body is still in that spot, under the tree
her dress ripped at the ends
No one ever found her
She was lost......
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It reminds me of the scarlet letter only without the letter ya know?
good though :-)
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lol. Thanks Alecs!
love ya! : )
Andrea
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bumpo.
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Actually, it seems quite tragic.
Why didn't she just pull out her cel phone and call someone? lol
I liked it.
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lol. thanks! :)
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Of course, I was joking.
I feel bad for her; it seemed to me that she went to get lost on purpose. Just my interpretation.
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yes, actually, she did get lost on purpose. She was mad at the world, so she ran and ran.
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Like I said, I feel bad for her.
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yes. Sad stuff. *nods*
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You did write about her.
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yes. I went through something like that myself, but I didn't die. I just cried, and cried.
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hmmmm interesting, go on..
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when I dumped my ex-boyfriend, I found out he was cheating on me
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hehe cool!
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its cool that my ex boyfriend was cheating on me?!
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No, I would done one of those quote things if I ment that.
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lol. just asking
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Cheatin on someone is like the biggest way you could ever insult them.
Sorry to hear that Andrea.
But, things are better now, right? :?
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yes. 's all good, now.
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Andrea's with me now. hehe and my boyfriend Brian..it's like a 3 some thing!! hahahahaha jk jk jk
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you better not be cheating on me, miss shelly! :evil: