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Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 03, 2003, 01:59:18 pm
She ran through the forest
Never to stop
Leaves crunching beneath her feet
Her dress torn at the ends
Her arms and legs scratched
There was nowhere for her to go
She was lost
All of the towns people searching for her
None could find her
She had vanished
No sign left of her whereabouts
She didn't want to be found
She kept running
Her legs gave way
She fell
She hit the dirt
She dragged herself under a tree
She sat there for who knows how long
Was she there a day?
A week?
A month?
She hadn't moved from the spot
She sat...thinking
Should she go back?
Should she stay?
She was lost
no one had found her yet
Still in the same spot, she died a slow death
Slowly she left our world
Her body is still in that spot, under the tree
her dress ripped at the ends
No one ever found her
She was lost......
Title: wow
Post by: Alecs on June 03, 2003, 02:05:55 pm
It reminds me of the scarlet letter only without the letter ya know?


good though :-)
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 03, 2003, 02:07:39 pm
lol. Thanks Alecs!

love ya! : )

Andrea
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 03, 2003, 04:25:57 pm
bumpo.
Title: Andrea
Post by: topher8467 on June 04, 2003, 10:08:57 am
Actually, it seems quite tragic.

Why didn't she just pull out her cel phone and call someone? lol

I liked it.
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 04, 2003, 12:07:41 pm
lol. thanks! :)
Title: j/k
Post by: topher8467 on June 04, 2003, 02:49:37 pm
Of course, I was joking.

I feel bad for her; it seemed to me that she went to get lost on purpose. Just my interpretation.
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 04, 2003, 02:53:03 pm
yes, actually, she did get lost on purpose. She was mad at the world, so she ran and ran.
Title: Yeah
Post by: topher8467 on June 04, 2003, 02:55:57 pm
Like I said, I feel bad for her.
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 04, 2003, 02:57:42 pm
yes. Sad stuff. *nods*
Title: Well
Post by: topher8467 on June 04, 2003, 03:05:29 pm
You did write about her.
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 04, 2003, 03:06:57 pm
yes. I went through something like that myself, but I didn't die. I just cried, and cried.
Title: ...
Post by: Alecs on June 05, 2003, 12:07:48 am
hmmmm interesting, go on..
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 05, 2003, 01:33:24 pm
when I dumped my ex-boyfriend, I found out he was cheating on me
Title: Lost
Post by: Blake on June 05, 2003, 01:35:57 pm
hehe cool!
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 05, 2003, 01:37:17 pm
its cool that my ex boyfriend was cheating on me?!
Title: Lost
Post by: Blake on June 05, 2003, 01:44:57 pm
No, I would done one of those quote things if I ment that.
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 05, 2003, 01:47:17 pm
lol. just asking
Title: That sucks
Post by: topher8467 on June 05, 2003, 04:25:52 pm
Cheatin on someone is like the biggest way you could ever insult them.

Sorry to hear that Andrea.

But, things are better now, right?  :?
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 05, 2003, 06:11:16 pm
yes. 's all good, now.
Title: Lost
Post by: sayyouwould on June 05, 2003, 08:01:53 pm
Andrea's with me now. hehe and my boyfriend Brian..it's like a 3 some thing!! hahahahaha jk jk jk
Title: Lost
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 07, 2003, 09:58:36 am
you better not be cheating on me, miss shelly!  :evil: