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Title: As Cool As You (poem)
Post by: Julie on June 27, 2004, 07:59:07 pm

So I guess we all can't be as cool as you
We can't all obsess of our clothes and posessions
We can't all have your greatness and obsessions
But you say we should atleast try
Why?
So we don't have to cry over the things you say?
Your words don't mean a thing to me
So, go on
Bust your nut to make me feel like shit
It won't work and you'll go crazy 'cause of it
That's when I'll smile and know that all the while
You're the one who's missin' out
On what life could be if you just stop,
Look,
Listen,
To what it's all about

Yeah,
I should buy clothes I can get for less
I should drive and pray not to crash
I should listen to your every word
And take in what you're so-called intelligence applies
But all I hear is fuckin' lies
Come out of that trap you call perfect lips
When you strut 'round the room
When for real, no gives a shit
You are nothing but a dumb bitch
Who wanders for someone to trash
Well, when Nessa and I roll by in our car
You'll sit and wonder
Who's really the star?
Is it me? Is it them?
Couldn't be, for they didn't take my lead

Blah, blah
Waa, waa
Boo-fuckin'-hoo
I hate you
Ooh, that makes you feel bad
I don't care
When I see you
All I want to do is spit
You stupid shit
And we'll taunt with an evil grin just for you
"Gee, if only we were as cool as you."

Title: As Cool As You (poem)
Post by: clamicas on June 27, 2004, 08:14:19 pm

I really liked this one 8O  8O very cool!!! :D

Title: As Cool As You (poem)
Post by: LimeTwister on June 27, 2004, 08:22:04 pm

i absolutely love the last part...

I like it, good work!

Title: Re:
Post by: Julie on June 27, 2004, 08:29:19 pm

Yeah, I love the last part also...it's so "TAKE THAT!" and IN YOUR FACE... :lol:

Title: As Cool As You (poem)
Post by: LimeTwister on June 27, 2004, 09:15:42 pm

lol, yea.

Title: As Cool As You (poem)
Post by: tylor2000 on June 29, 2004, 09:48:06 am

Yeah, that is great!  I love it.

tylor

Title: As Cool As You (poem)
Post by: Jameson on June 29, 2004, 10:02:18 am

Strong impact, 'specially the last stanza! I really like it! :D

Title: As Cool As You (poem)
Post by: vanessafan18 on June 30, 2004, 03:21:07 am

Amazing and extremely powerful! xoxo