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Tiger Baby

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« on: August 01, 2003, 03:03:26 pm »
I'm on a journey to self discovery,
To find the real person in me
Not some fake wannabe
But the true person in me
Who am I? Where did I go wrong?
I'm tired of searching for so long
Everyone knows what they want to be
Everyone, that is, but me
I don't know what my future may hold
What happens tomorrow, I don't know (hold and know don't really ryhme, but oh well lol)
I'm on a journey to self discovery,
To find the real person in me
Not some fake wannabe
But the true person in me

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The name is Jones, Andrea Jones.
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« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2003, 06:17:24 am »
I think this is one of your best one yet Andrea!

Oh and if you ever noticed, a lot songs don't actually have the "rhyming" thing going on either... but really its just the same vowel sound... so actually if you put the emphasise on your long o, they go together just fine and dandy. :) hee hee
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« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2003, 07:40:07 am »
That's a cool poem Andrea. Pretty deep.
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« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2003, 09:15:47 am »
Quote from: "Ms.Redd"
I think this is one of your best one yet Andrea!

Oh and if you ever noticed, a lot songs don't actually have the "rhyming" thing going on either... but really its just the same vowel sound... so actually if you put the emphasise on your long o, they go together just fine and dandy. :) hee hee


LOL Thanks Mal!!
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« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2003, 09:16:25 am »
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That's a cool poem Andrea. Pretty deep.


Thank you, Nagyovafan. I'm glad you both like it!
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« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2003, 03:12:05 pm »
Andi Girl,

That was great. Way to go!!

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« Reply #6 on: August 02, 2003, 03:16:18 pm »
Thanks Topher Boy!!! : )

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« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2003, 07:55:52 pm »
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That's a cool poem Andrea. Pretty deep.


Thank you, Nagyovafan. I'm glad you both like it!


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« Reply #8 on: August 03, 2003, 12:09:36 am »
great poem
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« Reply #9 on: August 03, 2003, 12:23:30 pm »
Sorry JOEY.

Thanks, glad ya like it.
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« Reply #10 on: August 03, 2003, 01:58:37 pm »
It's my pleasure to enjoy it, ANDREA!

(my name's not joey)

just joking
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« Reply #11 on: August 03, 2003, 03:32:14 pm »
Quote from: "Nagyovafan"

(my name's not joey)

just joking


lol you almost had me fooled, except i saw the part where it says 'Nagyovafan/Joey' lol
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« Reply #12 on: August 03, 2003, 07:59:30 pm »
Hehe, I have to take that out, then I'll get away with that.  :twisted:
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« Reply #13 on: August 04, 2003, 08:45:21 am »
lol. Then my name isn't andrea!

Tiger Baby/ Andrea ; )

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good stuff Andrea
« Reply #14 on: August 04, 2003, 10:38:51 pm »
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