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So I wrote this
« on: September 02, 2003, 12:27:30 pm »
It's called Concrete (thanks to Joey . . . The Nagyovafan one)

Outside the Fall light is fogging up the trees in sight.
And for miles all you see is street.
But something else that takes my breath away,
You on your front porch waiting for a voice to kill the Concrete.
The wind catches you in my eyes,
And takes the vision of you away forever.
And I promised to think passed the grey, Fall skies.
You promised you'd stay with me,
But forever's gone, and so are you.
On the sidewalk of the street where I met you first,
It feels like someone's building up a wall.
And your kiss won't leave my mouth,
Like your voice won't leave my head.
All I wanted was to hear you once more,
But I got your note instead, it said,
"I don't believe everything I hear."
For the last few months, I was all you heard.
And I want you here, but you left again.
Now I'm missing you I don't know what I'm thinking.
I'm waiting on the roof with you.
You're looking at the ground, too.
But you don't know if you should be jumping.
"I promise you it's okay, have I ever let you down?
We can rise, just don't hit the ground."
Sorry you never let me have a chance to finish.
Just get back with me, I'll give you everything.
I know it's not hat much, but it's better than jumping.
Then again, anything's better than jumping.

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So I wrote this
« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2003, 12:32:13 pm »
Yeah, the Nagyovafan one, Limey's a loser! :wink:
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So I wrote this
« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2003, 01:09:55 pm »
Quote from: "Nagyovafan"
Yeah, the Nagyovafan one, Limey's a loser! :wink:


I'm a lil tired of you....


you're just mean...

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So I wrote this
« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2003, 01:31:53 pm »
Quote from: "LimeTwister"
Quote from: "Nagyovafan"
Yeah, the Nagyovafan one, Limey's a loser! :wink:


I'm a lil tired of you....


you're just mean...


whoot whoot Get 'em Joeyyyyyyyyyyyy! :wink:

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So I wrote this
« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2003, 01:48:25 pm »
Ceceeee, I love that!

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So I wrote this
« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2003, 04:24:23 pm »
You know I'm joshing, everybody loves Limey better... Where is the love, y'all?  :wink:
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So I wrote this
« Reply #6 on: September 03, 2003, 06:05:58 am »
That's great Cece!!!
The distance between insanity and genius is measured only by success.

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So I wrote this
« Reply #7 on: September 03, 2003, 11:38:55 am »
Thanks yo G's

I could sooo be a gangsta.

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So I wrote this
« Reply #8 on: September 03, 2003, 12:47:16 pm »
Thats really good Cece...

And Joey, Limey's not a loser!!!!! Leave my hoo hoo alone!!!!

*otherwise I'll stick this here kareoke pretzel up your butt*

LOL! jk

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So I wrote this
« Reply #9 on: September 03, 2003, 12:54:30 pm »
Thanks Mallory :D

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So I wrote this
« Reply #10 on: September 03, 2003, 12:57:11 pm »
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Thanks Mallory :D

yeah no problem... when I really like something, I say so. :)

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So I wrote this
« Reply #11 on: September 04, 2003, 07:10:40 am »
hmmm....:)

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So I wrote this
« Reply #12 on: September 04, 2003, 10:21:13 am »
Quote from: "Ms.Redd"
Thats really good Cece...

And Joey, Limey's not a loser!!!!! Leave my hoo hoo alone!!!!

*otherwise I'll stick this here kareoke pretzel up your butt*

LOL! jk



You knew I was kidding! *covers butt with hands*
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So I wrote this
« Reply #13 on: September 05, 2003, 05:09:08 pm »
Here's another one, it's a little more odd than others but, anyway. (It's written for a reyalp llabesab.

Pinstripe Fabric
What you want from me,
I can't give you everything.
But I'll sell you my soul.
I gave you my heart.
Do you still have it?
It's hard to tell sometimes,
The way you talk is often misleading.
But I can't help but want you more.
And I told you I'm sorry for what I did.
But you don't want to see me anymore.

You and I both were okay for a while,
Then I was good while you were drinking poison.
You and I were okay for a while,
Then you were fine while I was suffering.

So wake up tomorrow and leave me,
By myself, a note won't do.
And I heard it's getting colder.
Seriously, I know how much you love the rain.
Your life is a fabric, delicate, seamable, but easily torn apart.
And when I'm gone all you'll have is pinstripe to your name.

I won't keep you up late.
Don't worry about writing.
I won't keep you up late.
I'm hanging up the phone.