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Title: Immature
Post by: Gina on February 18, 2004, 04:51:33 pm

It amazes me
How unforgiving,
How unremorseful
You are.
Boy, you need to get over yourself.
Realize that you are weak.
But I am strong,
I'm appologetic,
I'm forgiving.
Why must we live this way?
Can you not accept
That you've done wrong,
You've hurt people.
I'm much less than perfect,
but much more mature
Than you are, it seems.
I hope that someday
you realize that people make mistakes,
and that accepting them,
and forgiving them,
only can make you stronger.
I have learned,
When will you?
You're living in a world
all your own,
where shunning those
who have done you wrong
and you have done wrong
is okay.
Someday you'll wake
from this dream,
until then,
you're just...
immature.


sorry... needed to vent is all.  no real structure to that, just jumbled words n thoughts- that i just wrote out at this moment.

Title: Immature
Post by: divasteph on February 18, 2004, 04:53:40 pm

*snaps* very spoken word - the linage.... and the flow --- LOVE IT!!!

Title: Immature
Post by: jlmusicchick on February 18, 2004, 05:06:52 pm

Quote from: "divasteph"

*snaps* very spoken word - the linage.... and the flow --- LOVE IT!!!

LMAO, i'm picturing Steph in a black turtleneck and jeans with a black buret *sp?* at an upscale poetry club :-P and the audience snapping in the background...hahahhaaa....

anywhose, good poem Gina! Very in-your-face, it's cool!

Title: Immature
Post by: LimeTwister on February 18, 2004, 05:38:13 pm

*snaps* at jess's imaginary poetry club...

*if ya need to talk i am here gina*

hope it's not for me...but I think I might know who it is about.

Title: Immature
Post by: Gina on February 18, 2004, 06:17:27 pm

Thanks ya'll

and no joey its not about you :wink:  silly goose!

Title: Immature
Post by: jlmusicchick on February 18, 2004, 07:17:05 pm

Quote from: "LimeTwister"

*snaps* at jess's imaginary poetry club...

LMAO, i think that's going to be my new life goal :-P And when it opens, the first reading will be done by Gina, and joey, you can be the "head snapper" ooooooooooor! the guy who plays the bongo in the background! okay, i'm finding this too amusing :razz:

Title: Immature
Post by: Dancernl on February 19, 2004, 06:04:19 am

Quote from: "jlmusicchick"

Quote from: "LimeTwister"

*snaps* at jess's imaginary poetry club...

LMAO, i think that's going to be my new life goal :-P And when it opens, the first reading will be done by Gina, and joey, you can be the "head snapper" ooooooooooor! the guy who plays the bongo in the background! okay, i'm finding this too amusing :razz:

are we going to call eachother hip chicks and cool cats?  Because count me in if we are :wink:

Title: Immature
Post by: Tia on February 19, 2004, 06:27:01 am

Fab! :D

Title: Immature
Post by: Gina on February 19, 2004, 12:31:44 pm

haha yay, sounds like fun!

Title: Immature
Post by: c'estlavie on February 19, 2004, 01:18:53 pm

thats awesome gina! nice one  :D

Lisa xxx

Title: Immature
Post by: LimeTwister on February 19, 2004, 01:25:27 pm

Quote from: "jlmusicchick"

Quote from: "LimeTwister"

*snaps* at jess's imaginary poetry club...

LMAO, i think that's going to be my new life goal :-P And when it opens, the first reading will be done by Gina, and joey, you can be the "head snapper" ooooooooooor! the guy who plays the bongo in the background! okay, i'm finding this too amusing :razz:

can i read some too? lol...

*plays bongos*

Quote

are we going to call eachother hip chicks and cool cats? Because count me in if we are

you can be my hip chick any day  :wink:

Title: Immature
Post by: jlmusicchick on February 19, 2004, 01:46:07 pm

Quote from: "LimeTwister"

Quote from: "jlmusicchick"

Quote from: "LimeTwister"

*snaps* at jess's imaginary poetry club...

LMAO, i think that's going to be my new life goal :-P And when it opens, the first reading will be done by Gina, and joey, you can be the "head snapper" ooooooooooor! the guy who plays the bongo in the background! okay, i'm finding this too amusing :razz:

can i read some too? lol...

*plays bongos*

Lol if you so desire :-P

Title: Immature
Post by: Alecs on February 28, 2004, 08:42:24 am

I liked that a lot Gina. :)

Title: Immature
Post by: Gina on February 28, 2004, 08:47:52 am

Well thank you Alecs!

Title: Immature
Post by: Alecs on February 28, 2004, 08:49:41 am

Really, I thought it was great. I always try to check this topic and read everything here. I think this is really good.  :)