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« on: July 30, 2007, 07:08:29 pm »
I've just created this but I'm not too sure about it. Any suggestions are welcomed.


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« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2007, 08:11:48 pm »
It's cool but maybe you could add like one more "shadow" behind V like in between those two. And the heroes and thieves text in the back ground is kind of plain. maybe like the entire lyrics of hands on me would look cooler. my opinion. :D

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« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2007, 08:15:31 pm »
omg its so cute! i love it!

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« Reply #3 on: July 30, 2007, 10:09:26 pm »
i really like it :)

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« Reply #4 on: July 30, 2007, 10:38:17 pm »
I like it just add a bit more color to it but other than that love it.

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« Reply #5 on: July 31, 2007, 03:32:17 am »
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It's cool but maybe you could add like one more "shadow" behind V like in between those two. And the heroes and thieves text in the back ground is kind of plain. maybe like the entire lyrics of hands on me would look cooler. my opinion. :D


i love those suggestions

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« Reply #6 on: July 31, 2007, 06:20:35 am »
Thanks! I'm gonna try all of that now! ;)

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« Reply #7 on: July 31, 2007, 06:52:07 am »
How about now?


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« Reply #8 on: July 31, 2007, 07:35:11 am »
mmhmm I like that one better. =]

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« Reply #9 on: July 31, 2007, 08:57:09 am »
Thanks! :D

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« Reply #10 on: July 31, 2007, 11:13:28 am »
Beautiful! i like it a lot now.

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« Reply #11 on: July 31, 2007, 11:55:02 am »
I like the first one. It's true that odd numbers usually look best together, but I like the 2 blends of V in the first one best for some reason. The font for If you don't believe me is plain, but it's in good contrast with the hands on me. You might want to darken up the red so that it matches the pink a bit better- like cranberry red looks better with pink than fire engine red. Just my opinion, though.

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« Reply #12 on: July 31, 2007, 12:37:01 pm »
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I like the first one. It's true that odd numbers usually look best together, but I like the 2 blends of V in the first one best for some reason. The font for If you don't believe me is plain, but it's in good contrast with the hands on me. You might want to darken up the red so that it matches the pink a bit better- like cranberry red looks better with pink than fire engine red. Just my opinion, though.


Thanks a lot! I'll have a play around with it later on.

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« Reply #13 on: July 31, 2007, 01:24:26 pm »
I do like the second one more, but I agree with Noelle that maybe just 2 vanessas is the right number.

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« Reply #14 on: July 31, 2007, 07:28:54 pm »
OR you could take out the third shadow, and leave the one in between. That'd look cool too.