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Title: Seperated
Post by: ImLearning on July 20, 2007, 03:50:20 pm
I'm confused about the feelings of my own heart,
wandering around and I don't know where to start.
Im tripping over my own two feet,
do I know who I am or what is me?

Feeling empty and lifeless-palest flesh my skin,
holding all the misery-trapping it within.
Looking in the mirror I'm ugly and abused,
tired and weary I'm afraid I'm of no use.

Chorus:
It was never about me,
it was never about you.
it was about us
and what we were meant to go through.
But we never made it
now I feel so separated.

I miss the smiles that brought me up when I was down,
now I wander the world to be lost and never found.
Sometimes I catch myself asking if you feel the same,
in a hollow world where life seems so mundane.

I've got the gun with the trigger right along my finger
I used to live but now I merely roam and linger.
Life is no longer what it used to be to me,
I find there's no reason left that I should breathe.

Chorus:
It was never about me,
it was never about you.
it was about us
and what we were meant to go through.
But we never made it
now I feel so separated.

"I used to love you once" calls the echo of her voice
and I replied that she left me by her own choice.
That she broke my heart and threw all my love away
she was the one to leave and I remained to stay.

Chorus:
It was never about me,
it was never about you.
it was about us
and what we were meant to go through.
But we never made it
now I feel so separated.
Title: Seperated
Post by: VaderDawsn on July 20, 2007, 04:01:08 pm
wow.. I got tears in my eyes. That was touching. Nicely done.
Title: Seperated
Post by: ImLearning on July 20, 2007, 05:33:48 pm
thanks for the compliment :)

wondering what people liked / didn't like about the song
Title: Seperated
Post by: itsthefiveofus on July 20, 2007, 05:49:14 pm
I pretty much liked the entire song! Great job, I like it a lot.