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Title: Thoughts?
Post by: Martin. on July 30, 2007, 07:08:29 pm

I've just created this but I'm not too sure about it. Any suggestions are welcomed.

(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b364/white_houses01/vchands.jpg)

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: Suicidalboobs on July 30, 2007, 08:11:48 pm

It's cool but maybe you could add like one more "shadow" behind V like in between those two. And the heroes and thieves text in the back ground is kind of plain. maybe like the entire lyrics of hands on me would look cooler. my opinion. :D

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: luxbabylux on July 30, 2007, 08:15:31 pm

omg its so cute! i love it!

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: PianoPlayer12 on July 30, 2007, 10:09:26 pm

i really like it :)

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: itsthefiveofus on July 30, 2007, 10:38:17 pm

I like it just add a bit more color to it but other than that love it.

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: me and my piano---tim on July 31, 2007, 03:32:17 am

Quote from: "Suicidalboobs"

It's cool but maybe you could add like one more "shadow" behind V like in between those two. And the heroes and thieves text in the back ground is kind of plain. maybe like the entire lyrics of hands on me would look cooler. my opinion. :D

i love those suggestions

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: Martin. on July 31, 2007, 06:20:35 am

Thanks! I'm gonna try all of that now! ;)

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: Martin. on July 31, 2007, 06:52:07 am

How about now?

(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b364/white_houses01/handsonme.jpg)

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: itsthefiveofus on July 31, 2007, 07:35:11 am

mmhmm I like that one better. =]

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: Martin. on July 31, 2007, 08:57:09 am

Thanks! :D

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: Suicidalboobs on July 31, 2007, 11:13:28 am

Beautiful! i like it a lot now.

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: NoelleNC on July 31, 2007, 11:55:02 am

I like the first one. It's true that odd numbers usually look best together, but I like the 2 blends of V in the first one best for some reason. The font for If you don't believe me is plain, but it's in good contrast with the hands on me. You might want to darken up the red so that it matches the pink a bit better- like cranberry red looks better with pink than fire engine red. Just my opinion, though.

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: Martin. on July 31, 2007, 12:37:01 pm

Quote from: "NoelleNC"

I like the first one. It's true that odd numbers usually look best together, but I like the 2 blends of V in the first one best for some reason. The font for If you don't believe me is plain, but it's in good contrast with the hands on me. You might want to darken up the red so that it matches the pink a bit better- like cranberry red looks better with pink than fire engine red. Just my opinion, though.

Thanks a lot! I'll have a play around with it later on.

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: me and my piano---tim on July 31, 2007, 01:24:26 pm

I do like the second one more, but I agree with Noelle that maybe just 2 vanessas is the right number.

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: Suicidalboobs on July 31, 2007, 07:28:54 pm

OR you could take out the third shadow, and leave the one in between. That'd look cool too.

Title: Thoughts?
Post by: **Ann-Marie89** on September 30, 2007, 03:21:51 am

I think, You should Enlarge the background Nessa, And only have one black and white one. Simple is effective. Enlarge the back one and place it so her face and top half are showing to the back left of the colour Vanessa. And make it so its straight perhaps. Then maybe enlarge one set of words, and put the words to more of one side, for asymmetrical balance  :wink:

Just my thoughts anyway.. I think its lovely!

Katherine Ann Marie xox