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Title: something i wrote...
Post by: Silence is everything... on November 03, 2007, 10:38:40 pm

its untitled at the moment but i hope you enjoy all the same...





in this strange world we live
nothing's the same
so much we give
and it's taken away
best friends for life
and strangers the next
if only time
could stop in the past
an honest embrace
to soothe the pain
forgetting faces
that never change
the times we laughed
the times we cried
never got the chance
to say goodbye
in this strange world we live
nothing's the same
so much we give
and it's taken away

Title: Re: something i wrote...
Post by: Morgan on November 04, 2007, 05:04:12 pm

Quote from: "Silence is everything..."

its untitled at the moment but i hope you enjoy all the same...





in this strange world we live
nothing's the same
so much we give
and it's taken away
best friends for life
and strangers the next
if only time
could stop in the past
an honest embrace
to soothe the pain
forgetting faces
that never change
the times we laughed
the times we cried
never got the chance
to say goodbye
in this strange world we live
nothing's the same
so much we give
and it's taken away

I'm no official critic but personally, I think that's pretty. Really nice.

Title: something i wrote...
Post by: Silence is everything... on November 05, 2007, 01:35:18 pm

thanx! i really appreciate it!

Title: something i wrote...
Post by: IfICouldFall on November 05, 2007, 03:06:30 pm

when i read it, more than this just keeps playing in my head lol. but it's good, i like it.

Title: something i wrote...
Post by: Silence is everything... on November 06, 2007, 04:07:15 pm

haha thanx!!!