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Title: Just Say It
Post by: maag on June 29, 2008, 12:37:43 pm

Hi!
Finally, I've made a song with lyrics! I'm working on the sheet music, which I can give you if you want. I put the lyrics here; I don't know if they're totally correct, so if you see mistakes can you please tell? Thanks.

Just Say It

There's no room anywhere
As far as you can see
People look at themselves
Beyond their eyes, it seems

Try to remain unshaken
You just can't
You don't avoid, tears fall
Not-loved soul, stay here

CHORUS:
Get close to me
Bring your feelings with
Don't cry, don't yell
Just say, just, just
Get close to me
Bring your feelings with
Don't give up, don't say
You don't have a chance

Such a new world you catch
You figure out how could it be
Being free, being part
Of a brand new melody

CHORUS x2

There's no room anywhere
As far as you can see
People look at themselves
Beyond their eyes, it seems


Bye!

Title: Just Say It
Post by: shinesobright07 on June 29, 2008, 01:44:06 pm

I love these lyrics. They're very intelligent and seem to have deep meaning.

Title: Just Say It
Post by: maag on June 30, 2008, 02:14:17 am

Thanks! Have you seen any mistakes?

Title: Just Say It
Post by: shinesobright07 on June 30, 2008, 07:37:56 am

Not that I can see!  :)