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Other Topics => Creative Endeavors => Topic started by: flimsysurface on December 23, 2008, 03:43:33 am
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Hi guys
Its been like ages since i've been on here thought i would pop in and say hi, also i have been doing alot of recording with some music agenty kinda people and we've been working on alot of my songs, on this thread after christmas i will be posting some of my songs from the studio and it would be lovely if you guys could give me some constructive critisism. Please write back and let me know if you guys are up for it.
Merry Christmas.
Here are the lyrics to the first song i will be putting up.
Superman
I'm high in your presence
Your smile cuts deep into me
You came and conquered this heart
One last task, take of the mask
Chorus:
Don't try to be a superman
Your just stumbling into wonderland
I'm only pleading to help you see
If you want to save the world start with me...
In your eyes i was perfect
I felt i could do anything
Then you left me hanging on
The edge of safety so long gone
Chorus
Your the brightest star in my sky
You guide me through the darkest nights
Lost inside the blackest tombs
And i can't see the sun anymore...
i don't know if i miss you, hate you
Or love you all the same
I won't stop you being superman
Just try and be here when you can
I only wrote this song to help you see
When you and save the world, please remember me....
Lee
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Sounds good :D
Can't wait to hear the songs :D
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liking those lyrics and I can't wait to hear your songs :D
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Sorry bout the lateness with the song, laptop broke just got it fixed, over the next few days i'll find a way to get the song accessible to you guys.
Lee :D