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Title: New Cover of ATM
Post by: saphire on January 17, 2010, 05:47:32 am

Well at least i covered the song in my own way and i'd really like to know what you think about it ^^

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gU6Sq-gz5Vs

Title: Re: New Cover of ATM
Post by: Serentic on January 17, 2010, 09:02:54 am

First off, it's very good. :3 Your piano playing is exceptional. And the fingerings you used for this work perfectly, so none of it sounds awkward.

Now, when you sing "and I need you, and I miss you," it's a bit out of tune. I want to say you're about a half pitch sharp there. Now, when you hold notes, use vibrato, otherwise it'll come out off-tune as well.

This part is just speculation: When you write songs, or even make arrangements of them, all of the instruments as well as the voice should be able to stand-alone -- without any other backup -- this works with your piano, but if you were just to sing, I think it might come out rather odd.

But still, it's a very good job, and I hope you don't take my critique too harsh. <3