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Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: Ms.Redd on June 17, 2003, 04:36:45 pm

Maybe if I hold my breath
I'll just pass out
And forget why I'm so
Fed up with it all
I won't remember or think
Upon what's going on
Or be focusing on constantly
Holding back the tears
Which want to flow like
The rough current from
Wild rivers

Maybe if I close my eyes
As tight as I can get them
I won't see what gets
Me so angry and frustrated
I won't believe it
Because I won't see it
I can't stand to watch
As my life spirals like a
Spring that consistanly bounces
Up and down with a
Seemingly neverending motion

Maybe if I plug my ears
I'll be deaf as the disabled
Never hearing what gets
My sadness on the move
When the words won't be heard
Even though said
And the worries I feel now
Will be vanished and untraceable
Like the rays of the sun
When the clouds cast
They're filter on them

Maybe if...

Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: LimeTwister on June 17, 2003, 05:21:54 pm

if ya wanna read crap, I will let you read my stuff..yours isn't crap.

Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: Ms.Redd on June 17, 2003, 06:13:20 pm

Quote from: "LimeTwister"

if ya wanna read crap, I will let you read my stuff...

i've read some of the stuff your posted... I've always liked them!

Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: Xennifr on June 17, 2003, 06:20:06 pm

letting your feelings out doesn't really help..i say go watch kung fu movies and use a punching bag..that always works for me :wink:

Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 17, 2003, 06:21:03 pm

Very good Mal!!

Andrea

Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: Ms.Redd on June 17, 2003, 06:22:47 pm

Thanks Andrea...

Quote from: "Xennifr"

letting your feelings out doesn't really help..i say go watch kung fu movies and use a punching bag..that always works for me :wink:

If I had either of the two... it might be a little easier to do that...
 :oops:

Oh well. Jackie Chan is the bomb tho. Just thought I'd mention that.

Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: Ms.Redd on June 17, 2003, 06:23:12 pm

Quote

btw nice stuff

thanks Jen

Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: Xennifr on June 17, 2003, 06:23:51 pm

:D yeah he is...... :twisted:




no problem mallory..

Title: yet another crap work of mine
Post by: Tia on June 18, 2003, 02:27:51 am

it's great Mal!!!
not crap at all!