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Title: Emotion hider
Post by: babyblue43402 on June 20, 2003, 09:51:39 am

She sat alone with mixed emotions
her heart cried, but she wouldn't say it.
Doubt wrapped itself around her trapping her from the truth.
Tears begin to form but she tries to hide it....But i was the only one who knew

I said tell him, tell him,
ask him , ask him
want him and need him don't hide away from love..
ohh tell him

She can taste it, what she longs for
but she's blinded by a mirror.
A reflection of herself scares her away.
Running away from it she knows she'll have to confront it...And i was the only one who knew

I said tell him, tell him,
ask him , ask him
want him and need him don't hide away from love..
ohh tell him



 this is a song i wrote about my friend. She liked a guy but she was attached to this guy who was just bad news.. I was frustrated w/ her and soo i wrote this song. i  feel  like a dork showing this but ol' well . hope you like it!

Title: Emotion hider
Post by: drumpad on July 25, 2003, 01:33:05 pm

Beth, you already know how i feel about this song... you have so much potential as a song writer, and i cannot wait for you to make it big

Title: wow!!!
Post by: HappyZen on July 27, 2003, 04:43:12 am

I love it!
I can so relate to it!
The poem is really good, and if you can put down the right music, it would be a song taht could kick so much ass!

Title: Emotion hider
Post by: CheapandEvilgrl on July 27, 2003, 07:44:30 pm

ooooh
good stuff!

Title: Emotion hider
Post by: VanessaLover03 on July 31, 2003, 11:39:57 pm

that is great