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Title: "War Head"
Post by: David Hart on June 26, 2003, 07:04:48 pm

War Head

My hair is sodden—
A gnarled and drippy heap;
it boasts a faded glory
in disheveled mess; tantalizing
its feared adversary—
the plastic comb.  

It’s lost the clash;
Its comrades culled from scalp lay still, split ended—
tangled between fleets of finest teeth.

They fought to claim the noggin,
clinging strand for strand against
the rhythmic pull and tug.
Death hovered closely behind
brandishing the blow dryer.
Conditioner could not save them.

In the pipes below,
There is one last effort:
To clog the drain.

Title: "War Head"
Post by: LimeTwister on June 27, 2003, 04:50:51 am

interesting. :D

Title: "War Head"
Post by: Logikal X on June 27, 2003, 01:19:36 pm

lol...kinda reminds me of silverstien,...sounds cool

Title: yes
Post by: justaboy23 on June 30, 2003, 10:08:15 am

dark... love it



shine on

Title: kool
Post by: VanessaLover03 on July 02, 2003, 12:17:43 am

Thumbs up!  :D

Title: "War Head"
Post by: Tia on August 05, 2003, 04:19:13 am

neat =D

Title: "War Head"
Post by: Gina on August 05, 2003, 07:55:20 am

hmm... kinda cool. nice work :wink:

Title: "War Head"
Post by: Jophess on August 05, 2003, 07:57:04 am

Hehe, cool!

Title: "War Head"
Post by: Blake on August 05, 2003, 08:15:25 am

*checks to make sure he hasn't already replyed*

Great!