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Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 01, 2003, 03:03:26 pm

I'm on a journey to self discovery,
To find the real person in me
Not some fake wannabe
But the true person in me
Who am I? Where did I go wrong?
I'm tired of searching for so long
Everyone knows what they want to be
Everyone, that is, but me
I don't know what my future may hold
What happens tomorrow, I don't know (hold and know don't really ryhme, but oh well lol)
I'm on a journey to self discovery,
To find the real person in me
Not some fake wannabe
But the true person in me

__________________
The name is Jones, Andrea Jones.

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 02, 2003, 06:17:24 am

I think this is one of your best one yet Andrea!

Oh and if you ever noticed, a lot songs don't actually have the "rhyming" thing going on either... but really its just the same vowel sound... so actually if you put the emphasise on your long o, they go together just fine and dandy. :) hee hee

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Jophess on August 02, 2003, 07:40:07 am

That's a cool poem Andrea. Pretty deep.

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 02, 2003, 09:15:47 am

Quote from: "Ms.Redd"

I think this is one of your best one yet Andrea!

Oh and if you ever noticed, a lot songs don't actually have the "rhyming" thing going on either... but really its just the same vowel sound... so actually if you put the emphasise on your long o, they go together just fine and dandy. :) hee hee

LOL Thanks Mal!!

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 02, 2003, 09:16:25 am

Quote from: "Nagyovafan"

That's a cool poem Andrea. Pretty deep.

Thank you, Nagyovafan. I'm glad you both like it!

Title: Hey
Post by: topher8467 on August 02, 2003, 03:12:05 pm

Andi Girl,

That was great. Way to go!!

Topher Boy

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 02, 2003, 03:16:18 pm

Thanks Topher Boy!!! : )

~Andi

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Jophess on August 02, 2003, 07:55:52 pm

Quote from: "Tiger Baby"

Quote from: "Nagyovafan"

That's a cool poem Andrea. Pretty deep.

Thank you, Nagyovafan. I'm glad you both like it!

I have a name, you know!

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: VanessaLover03 on August 03, 2003, 12:09:36 am

great poem

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 03, 2003, 12:23:30 pm

Sorry JOEY.

Thanks, glad ya like it.

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Jophess on August 03, 2003, 01:58:37 pm

It's my pleasure to enjoy it, ANDREA!

(my name's not joey)

just joking

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 03, 2003, 03:32:14 pm

Quote from: "Nagyovafan"

(my name's not joey)

just joking

lol you almost had me fooled, except i saw the part where it says 'Nagyovafan/Joey' lol

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Jophess on August 03, 2003, 07:59:30 pm

Hehe, I have to take that out, then I'll get away with that.  :twisted:

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 04, 2003, 08:45:21 am

lol. Then my name isn't andrea!

Tiger Baby/ Andrea ; )

: P

Title: good stuff Andrea
Post by: Alecs on August 04, 2003, 10:38:51 pm

:wink:

Title: A short lil poem
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 05, 2003, 09:04:21 am

:)