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Title: Another one of my poems
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 05, 2003, 02:34:09 pm

Hate. Everything around her was going mad
Her world was coming crashing down
She felt she was going insane
She had no one to turn to
She didn't know how to express her feelings
She looked around saw no one
She was alone
Now what?
She had had the worst day of her life
Her boyfriend left her
She had gotten kicked out of algebra
She got detention for a week
Her parents were splitting up
Her Grandmother passed on
She was upset and angry at the same time
What could she do?
She sat down on her bed and cried
She cried, and cried, and cried, and cried
She pulled out her diary and wrote down all of her feelings
She hoped everything would be better the next day....
And it was

Title: Another one of my poems
Post by: x Jennifer x on August 06, 2003, 06:50:53 am

thats not a poem silly...lol

Title: Another one of my poems
Post by: Jophess on August 06, 2003, 07:05:33 am

Quote from: "x Jennifer x"

thats not a poem silly...lol

It's freelance, Jen.

Title: Another one of my poems
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 06, 2003, 07:52:17 am

not all poems have to rhyme, Jen.

Title: Another one of my poems
Post by: x Jennifer x on August 06, 2003, 09:09:37 am

of course not...but it still sounds a bit ..i dont know...it just isnt a poem.... :D

Title: Another one of my poems
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 06, 2003, 09:16:32 am

whatever you say, Jenny from the block ; )