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Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 06, 2003, 02:51:49 pm
Or something wierd like that. lol

My heart cooks
My fingers burn
Your song to me
Was all in vain
You used my love
You played a game
I'll have my chance
And when you pay...

I'll laugh I'll cry
Then I'll go on with my day
Cuz your so called love
Will hurt no one this way
Its fine and
Came just in time
Now take your lies
Close your eyes
And fade away

You've made a point
So have your laugh
At my expense
Justice be paid back
My love was true
And yours was fake
Now in my hand
Lays your final fate

So I'll laugh and I'll cry
Then I'll go on with my day
Cuz your so called love
Will hurt no one this way
Its fine and
Came just in time
Now take your lies
Close your eyes
And fade away

Your stare and wide eyes
Oh its just no suprise
And you thought in your mind
You'd get away...
When your tears fell like bricks
And your strength snapped like sticks
Just like twigs
You get sick
Then your gone

And I laughed and I cried
And I went on with my day
Cuz your so called love
Will hurt no one this way
Its fine and
Came just in time
You took your lies
Closed your eyes
And faded away

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Now please please please tell me what you think... I would really really really like to know.
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: LimeTwister on August 06, 2003, 04:20:09 pm
i wrote something like that..actually a lot of things like that!

lol but i don't think i have killed but one person in my writings....or maybe i have....lol


nice work!!!
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Blake on August 06, 2003, 04:28:46 pm
coolness!
Title: Thanks guys!
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 06, 2003, 07:04:00 pm
Glad you like it... Now if I could only get some one to gimme a beat. ! haha
Title: ummmm
Post by: Alecs on August 06, 2003, 11:37:45 pm
I love you Mallory! Don't kill! PM me instead!!!
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: VanessaLover03 on August 07, 2003, 12:45:10 am
dark...but kool
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Jophess on August 07, 2003, 06:05:09 am
spooky, lol, is there a tune to it?
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 07, 2003, 10:31:15 am
Quote from: "Nagyovafan"
spooky, lol, is there a tune to it?


Hmm... well thats what I'm working on.. I wish that I had some sorta computer thingy where I could make music, that would be awesome... ya know, sorta like what the girl from Coyote Ugly had... man, I can't remember her name. Anyways, thats not important, but yeah, I wish that I could have something like that... Be cool to try to actually make a song!

Is there any thing off the net that I could download when I get home that is something free and a mixing sorta program??

Well, if anyone has any advice, thoughts, or anything else, post!! :) :)

~~

ps-Alecs I love ya too! ;)
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: LimeTwister on August 07, 2003, 11:15:44 am
i had a beat in my head, lol...but to actually get you to hear what was in my head is a little impossible for me.
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 07, 2003, 11:24:38 am
Quote from: "LimeTwister"
i had a beat in my head, lol...but to actually get you to hear what was in my head is a little impossible for me.


nahhh! Its easy! Just go into programs/accessories/entertainment/soundrecorder . Once your there, hit the record button and start to bang your head on the desk... Be sure to make it loud, bang hard.

 :lol:

(yours truly,
    a hoo hoo)
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: LimeTwister on August 07, 2003, 11:45:26 am
Quote from: "Ms.Redd"
Quote from: "LimeTwister"
i had a beat in my head, lol...but to actually get you to hear what was in my head is a little impossible for me.


nahhh! Its easy! Just go into programs/accessories/entertainment/soundrecorder . Once your there, hit the record button and start to bang your head on the desk... Be sure to make it loud, bang hard.

 :lol:

(yours truly,
    a hoo hoo)


lol, yea that sounds like the advice of a hoo hoo....thanks!
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 09, 2003, 09:46:19 am
Quote from: "LimeTwister"
lol, yea that sounds like the advice of a hoo hoo....thanks!


hee hee, ... I mean... hoo hoo!!

lol, geeezzz...
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 09, 2003, 09:11:42 pm
AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!! I'm working on music to it now thanks to Nicky (Gently Realistic) and it's SO COOOOOL!!

I'll figure out to post it and stuff when I'm done working on it!!!
:) :) :)

*is so happy now, to answer Michelle's question*
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: divasteph on August 11, 2003, 06:19:31 am
"when your tears feel like bricks"
i love that line
xoxox
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Jophess on August 11, 2003, 10:02:13 am
if you want to make music, mal, get Cakewalk Music Creator 2003, it's easy to use, and makes good quality music.
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 11, 2003, 11:01:04 am
thanks Joey! :)
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Jophess on August 11, 2003, 12:27:58 pm
Quote from: "Ms.Redd"
thanks Joey! :)


your welcome. i really worked hard for it, too. :wink:
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: sweetdang on August 11, 2003, 09:05:06 pm
Very nice. I like it a lot : )
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Tia on August 15, 2003, 10:25:56 am
It rocks!!!  :D

Great song Mal!
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Jophess on August 26, 2003, 01:51:27 pm
Can I make a beat for it?
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 26, 2003, 02:36:37 pm
you can go ahead... But I'm still tossing around some stuff here on the piano...
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Jophess on August 26, 2003, 03:37:29 pm
Ooh, then you can finish writing it! Can I work on a tune for one of your other poems?
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 26, 2003, 05:29:29 pm
Yeah Joey go for it
But I don't take it personally if I don't use them for sure okay? Just don't wanna go out too much on not doing things myself. ;)
Title: hmmm
Post by: loginname101 on August 26, 2003, 05:32:04 pm
I think its really neat that you can write and make up music to go with it all on your own. You are really great :D
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Jophess on August 26, 2003, 05:49:53 pm
I'd be honored if you take it, and I'm not expecting you to!
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 26, 2003, 05:58:28 pm
well lemme know when ya do it and PM me the link ...
Title: My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
Post by: Jophess on August 26, 2003, 06:04:21 pm
K I have an intro written. I have to go now, please reply to my PM though!