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Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 09, 2003, 10:31:18 am
Verse 1
Boy you left me such a long time ago
Now you want me back, baby just let me go
I gotta tell you cause you really need to know
Boy you said you loved me and it just goes to show

CHORUS (I'm having trouble writing the chorus, I'll edit it when I have thought of a good chorus)

Verse 2
You say you want me back
Why? I thought I was a brat?
You said you couldn't get me off your mind
Dang boy, stop wasting my time
I gotta tell you something cause you really need to know
You said you loved me and it just goes to show

CHORUS

Bridge
Baby don't say say a word, unless its sincere
Maybe, being true is your greatest fear
If you true yourself, why can't you be true to me?
Baby, why can't you see?
You'd be lost without me

CHORUS

Ending
Oh baby, oh baby
Be true to yourself and be true to me
Then maybe, then maybe
Then you'll finally see
That it just goes to show
Maybe someday you'll know...

Repeat X2
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 09, 2003, 10:31:55 am
I hope y'all like it...

Andrea
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So what am I not supposed to have an opinion? Should I be quiet just because I'm a woman?
Call me a bitch cuz I speak what's on my mind, guess its easier for you to swallow if I sat and smiled -CA
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: JazzyManda on August 09, 2003, 10:34:29 am
wow that's cool. i like the lyrics



Amanda
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 09, 2003, 10:35:25 am
thanks, Amanda. I'm working on another one.


Andrea
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So what am I not supposed to have an opinion? Should I be quiet just because I'm a woman?
Call me a bitch cuz I speak what's on my mind, guess its easier for you to swallow if I sat and smiled -CA
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Ms.Redd on August 09, 2003, 10:41:18 am
cool!
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 09, 2003, 10:42:43 am
Thanks Mal :)


Andrea
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So what am I not supposed to have an opinion? Should I be quiet just because I'm a woman?
Call me a bitch cuz I speak what's on my mind, guess its easier for you to swallow if I sat and smiled -CA
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: babeykangaroo on August 09, 2003, 12:58:38 pm
thats really good :) well done
jo xxx
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 09, 2003, 01:25:25 pm
Thanks!!  :D


Andrea
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So what am I not supposed to have an opinion? Should I be quiet just because I'm a woman?
Call me a bitch cuz I speak what's on my mind, guess its easier for you to swallow if I sat and smiled -CA
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: topher8467 on August 09, 2003, 02:48:20 pm
Nice job Andi ... is that aimed at anyone in particular?

Topher
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 09, 2003, 03:25:45 pm
Thanks. No, it isn't aimed at anyone particular....I think. Maybe it is and I don't know it :?


Andrea
__________________
So what am I not supposed to have an opinion? Should I be quiet just because I'm a woman?
Call me a bitch cuz I speak what's on my mind, guess its easier for you to swallow if I sat and smiled -CA
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 10, 2003, 08:36:25 pm
bump


Andrea
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So what am I not supposed to have an opinion? Should I be quiet just because I'm  a woman?
Call me a bitch coz I speak what's on my mind, guess its easier for you to swallow if I sat and smiled. -CA
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 15, 2003, 08:28:46 am
bump


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So what am I not supposed to have an opinion? Should I be quiet because I'm a woman?
Call me a bitch coz I speak whats on my mind, guess its easier for you to swallow if I sat and smiled.
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: sayyouwould on August 19, 2003, 06:36:55 pm
Andrea is so creative!! I love her so!!
Title: My first song I've posted on here....
Post by: Tiger Baby on August 20, 2003, 02:35:45 pm
Thanks, sexy beast shelly =))