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Other Topics => Creative Endeavors => Topic started by: Ms.Redd on August 30, 2003, 07:57:35 pm
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:cD
http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/oh5/mallory0/ican.wav
There ya go Joey! I just wrote this today! It oughta make up for the vocals you weren't so thrilled about last time. ;c)
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hehe! *downloading* So freaking excited!
EDIT: Holy crap, it won't work! I'll try it again..
EDIT 2: It worked! Beautiful so far.
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Yeah thats weird, I dunno whats wrong with it... It worked for me. :)
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LYRICS--
Oohh Yeah
Don't tell me I can't
When walls cave in on me
And you tell me I can't stand
A chance, I have in me
And I believe that I can
ooo
I'll do all that I can
To prove it to
You
And how
Can you say these things
When you won't win
Now?
While the world is stuck in pain and grief
Like the gum on your shoe
Its hurts, and robs me like a thief
But I know I'll make it through
ooo
I'll do all that I can
To prove it to
You
And how
Can you say these things
When you won't win
Now?
ooo
Don't tell me I can't
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It worked, and I love it, now I am listening to "Rain Falls", and My Strength Be There and Portrait of Perfection. "I Can" is really good! I love the message. Sort of like Aaliyah's "Try Again" in a different style.
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You seem on a writing streak... Are you going to make any more?
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:o :o :o oh man! Mal, thats really amazing! I loved ur other two songs but this ones even better i think! You have even more of a range than i thought! Keep singin and playin hun! Youre so talented!!!!
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I like this one too, I dunno... Its just so short and the piano is repetitive. Not to mention, haha, I BARELY use my right hand at all!! Soo... I'm sorta still twiddlin' with it and seeing if I can find anything for the hand to do but I still think it'll pretty much sound the same over all.
I'm glad you liked it, ... I think vocally this too is my favorite.
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Good :)
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Just checking out my new sig, thats all. Don't mind lil' ole' me. ;c)
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lol it needs some work.
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you left out the word "faith"
in the lyrics
: )
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Removed
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Removed. Its a simple rule, don't insult other users -Kev222
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Removed.
well we got the criticism...the constructive part, i don't tend to see.
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8O wow thats great *claps*
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i wanna hear that song but it is not working