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Title: This thing.
Post by: badsrx7 on August 31, 2003, 01:56:15 am

Scar yourself today.
Manifest your pain for tomorrow.
Show it to the world.
Show it as to prevent from forgetting it.
And when you see tomorrow,
A tomorrow, where you'll need every scar and
every stitch,
you'll see today's true colors.
'cause it's not enough to live
but to live through it is far greater.
To live and work beyond,
why that's the great accomplishment
which requires great merit.
Why?
Why is it a must moving on?
Where do you go from here?
Where do you go when there is no
future in plain sight
and forgetfulness evades
A sharp mind that remembers
even the trivial
doesn't get you too far
when you don't need it,
where those thoughts are bags
of sand, stubborn and unwilling
to budge.
I need to know nobody knows
And so, I hope and
I wonder if you forget
'cause I know I can't.

Title: This thing.
Post by: badsrx7 on August 31, 2003, 01:59:34 am

So above is my first poem-thing on this board..

How touching is that?

Comments.. if you want.. I guess.

Or just read..

Do as you like in other words ;D


Woahh, I am such a thoughtful gal at 6 AM..

Title: This thing.
Post by: PIBby on August 31, 2003, 06:15:48 am

I like it! Good, I like the ending. Mhm.

What are you doing up at 6 am?

Title: This thing.
Post by: badsrx7 on August 31, 2003, 06:52:24 am

Idk, I just can't go to sleeep, soo I thought I'd try my luck at a creative endeavor.

Maybe it's the whole getting up at 6:30 PM thing.

lol

I still haven't gone to sleep and it's almost 11 AM.

Title: This thing.
Post by: PIBby on September 01, 2003, 01:09:54 pm

6:30?! LOL!

Title: This thing.
Post by: badsrx7 on September 01, 2003, 01:19:29 pm

Yup.

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Post by: Tia on September 02, 2003, 02:53:48 am

Wow...that is REALLY good!  8O

Title: This thing.
Post by: badsrx7 on September 02, 2003, 01:45:59 pm

Thanks, Tia.

Title: This thing.
Post by: Tia on September 03, 2003, 06:11:31 am

Quote from: "badsrx7"

Thanks, Tia.

You're very welcome =)

Title: ummm
Post by: Alecs on September 10, 2003, 08:44:11 am

that's coolness :wink:

Title: This thing.
Post by: badsrx7 on September 10, 2003, 07:06:40 pm

Thanks, Alecsss..

not as coool as you ;D haahaa.