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Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Tia on September 12, 2003, 03:15:27 am
Tomorrow

She doesn’t want to
But she knows she has no choice
She realizes she has to move on
But she keeps hearing that same old voice

Taunting her
Holding her back
She retreats inside herself
All over again
And watches her world fade to black

In her dreams and in her nightmares
Always in the back of her mind
She knows she has to leave it all and go
But she can’t leave the memory of that face behind

Taunting her
Holding her back
She retreats inside herself
All over again
And watches her world fade to black

She remembers the words
She remembers the false smiles
She remembers drowning in sorrow
Always hoping and praying…maybe tomorrow…

Maybe tomorrow I’ll be free of this
Maybe tomorrow I won’t have to run
But little does she realize
Tomorrow has already come…


Lemme know what y'all think! =)
Title: ummm
Post by: Alecs on September 12, 2003, 02:09:00 pm
good but depressing... :cry:
Title: Re: ummm
Post by: Tia on September 13, 2003, 03:45:26 am
Quote from: "Alecs"
good but depressing... :cry:


Thanks =)

Most of my stuff is like that  :wink:
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Layla on September 13, 2003, 04:12:12 am
yeah but thats alrite. coz thats what writing is for rite? letting it all out
i could never write like that so i respect anyone that can. mine are stupid!
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Tia on September 13, 2003, 12:16:20 pm
Quote from: "Layla"
yeah but thats alrite. coz thats what writing is for rite? letting it all out
i could never write like that so i respect anyone that can. mine are stupid!


thanks for the respect, hun =)

post some of yours! i'm sure they're not that bad...

surely, they can't be as bad as your nose  :wink:  :wink:
Title: Re: ummm
Post by: Blake on September 13, 2003, 12:37:39 pm
Quote from: "Alecs"
good but depressing... :cry:


same.
Title: Re: ummm
Post by: Tia on September 13, 2003, 12:43:29 pm
Quote from: "danielmarko"
Quote from: "Alecs"
good but depressing... :cry:


same.


lol. Thanks...I guess =)
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Layla on September 13, 2003, 12:45:31 pm
Quote from: "Miss T"
post some of yours! i'm sure they're not that bad...

surely, they can't be as bad as your nose  :wink:  :wink:

 8O RUUUUDE!
ok i will, but dont laugh
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Blake on September 13, 2003, 12:46:14 pm
Yeah, it was a complement...

haha!

[Daniel]
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Tia on September 13, 2003, 12:48:28 pm
=P @ Layla
I won't laugh =)


Quote from: "danielmarko"
Yeah, it was a complement...

haha!

[Daniel]


=D
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Vultch on September 13, 2003, 01:39:57 pm
It's quite good!

It reminded me of this...
"Maybe Tomorrow" - Mesh StL

You say you won't be frightened
And turn to your hate to rage
But time is not a virtue
That you gave me

And I won't say it's safe
But I'm in dire need
I'm down on my knees
Yeah

Who wants the love?
Who wants the hate?
Well we just need it
'Cause the world will never change

And all you ever wanted / My love
And all you ever needed / My love
And all my time was wasted

Not today
But maybe tomorrow
Not today
But maybe tomorrow
Maybe tomorrow
You won't be around to let me down

You say you won't be tortured
You say you won't be torn
But time is a virtue
That I gave you

And I won't say it's safe
But I'm in dire need.
I'm begging you please

Who wants the love?
Who wants the hate?
Well we just need it
'Cause the world will never change.

And all you ever wanted / My love
And all you ever needed / My love
And all my time was wasted

Not today
But maybe tomorrow
Not today
But maybe tomorrow
Maybe tomorrow
You won't be around to let me down

And all you ever wanted / My love
And all you ever needed / My love
And all you ever wanted / My love
And all my time was wasted

Not today
But maybe tomorrow
Not today
But maybe tomorrow
Maybe tomorrow
You won't be around to let me down

Not today, not today
(The world will never change)
(Let me down)
Not today, not today
(The world will never change)
(Let me down)
Not today, not today
(The world will never change)
(Let me down)
But maybe tomorrow
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Tia on September 14, 2003, 11:08:14 am
Thanks Kev! =D

Glad I (well, my writing) remind you of cool songs =P
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Ms.Redd on September 15, 2003, 11:42:33 am
Tia this , as is everything you write, is very good.
Title: (Maybe) Tomorrow...
Post by: Tia on September 16, 2003, 03:28:09 am
Quote from: "Ms.Redd"
Tia this , as is everything you write, is very good.


You're too nice...  :roll: