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Other Topics => Creative Endeavors => Topic started by: Layla on September 13, 2003, 12:49:09 pm
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This is the first proper song I wrote, although I've only done 3! Don't laugh, its a bit bland
http://www.angelfire.com/music5/layla/wannabeme.wav
Wanna Be Me
No-one’s perfect
It’s not a matter of perception
Everyone knows it
And sorry but I’m no exception
If you had faith in me
Then don’t stop believing
But you asked for too much
Now I can’t help what I’m feeling
Chorus
I can’t be moulded
Into your perfect girl
I can’t change
Into who you want me to be
So appreciate me
For who I am
Let me live my own life
Coz I wanna be free
From all the pain you’ve caused me
Oh why can’t you see?
And let me live my own life
Coz I wanna be me
You saw the best in me
And yet you still wanted more
But there was no rest of me
A fact you seemed to ignore
You took it too far
And didn’t know when to stop
I took a while to realise
But now I’ve had enough
Chorus
I’m not insulted
That you’re not satisfied with me
Or that you want to change
The only way I can be
But didn’t I tell you I wanna be me?
Chorus
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THAT'S GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ok less with the sarcasm :roll:
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Where's the sarcasm? I don't see any sarcasm... :headshake:
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aw thats so cute
and i see it, with the large writing and !!!!!!!s
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aw thats so cute
and i see it, with the large writing and !!!!!!!s
8O
That's not sarcasm, that's a compliment :?
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ok i believe u (maybe) thanks :D
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You're very welcome =D
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:D
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that's good stuff
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that's good stuff
thank you veeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyy much *hands Alecs and Tia roses*
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oo oo oo ! I wanna rose!
No I'm kidding, I like roses but you don't have to get me one. I just wanted to post and tell you your song is awesome. Do you have music to it yet? If you do will you post it?
-Mallory
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*Throws Mallory a rose too*
erm, yeah i do and i did record the first verse and chorus :oops: but its really bad! and i wanted sumthin in the background (coz i'm too lazy to learn how to play an instrument even tho i really want to) so i got one of these arab drums we have :lol: i'll listen 2 it again tonite and if its ok i'll post it
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There ya go Layla, you've got Mals approval...it has GOT to be good! :wink:
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its on a yahoo group, is that ok? i dunno anywhere else i can upload it to
:oops: :oops: :oops:
i promise i can sing better than that, and i sound like i'm about 3 years old
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/zorgoxmusic/files/Music
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I couldn't listen to it because it in the group. I'm not a member of that yahoo group, ... and therefore it won't let me into the files section.
Try using angelfire? I am disappointed because I really wanted to listen too!
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I couldn't listen to it because it in the group. I'm not a member of that yahoo group, ... and therefore it won't let me into the files section.
Try using angelfire? I am disappointed because I really wanted to listen too!
Me too!!!
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try this
http://www.angelfire.com/crazy2/crispyful/wannabeme.wav
may work, may not
:oops: (kinda hope it doesn't now)
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That's great!!!
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:oops: damn it, does that mean it worked?
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It sure did! =)
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:oops: :oops: :oops: *hides in a box*
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:oops: :oops: :oops: *hides in a box*
*shuts the lid*
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*suffocates - dies*
look what you've done now? murderer
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Oops...sorry. Didn't see you in there =)
haha...yes! we're rid of that awful :newbie: :twisted:
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:newbie:
haha thats brilliant!
a bit silly since u told me to come here
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:newbie:
haha thats brilliant!
a bit silly since u told me to come here
Joking, honey...joking =)
I Love ya really! :wink:
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great song
better than my songs :roll:
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thank you :D , are your songs on here?
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TIA shud i post another? i feel a bit stoopid now after listening to Mal's 8O wish i cud play guitar or sumthin. no no i wanna play drums!
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Layla I just got to listen this, and I think its awesome! I love your voice!
Awesome! oooh! You have more??? post more post more!!!!!
*I have a rose, if I give it to ya, will ya post more? hee hee*
*really likes her rose though, so will you just be generous hee hee-eeeee*
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aw thank you! i heard two of urs and i think they're brilliant! they sound really professional.
i'll post another up. the lyrics are a bit bad tho!
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i love it...
it might be cuz i have an acute obsession with the british...
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it might be cuz i have an acute obsession with the british...
8O riiiiiiiiiiiiight
well thanx :D
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i do! ask rosie...
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but most of the british suck! i'm moving to Canada, one day... *dreamily walks out of topic*