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Title: A song to someone
Post by: Mountaineer on September 22, 2003, 04:08:32 pm

its untittled but i dont know


I feel an emptyness
deep inside of me
like i've never felt
before

I can't go on
with out you baby
theres nothing i can do
only wish i could be there
for you


Its sad and sucky too

Title: It's not sucky!
Post by: jjthefourth on September 30, 2003, 06:00:38 pm

That's not sucky!  You have no idea how true those lyrics were at a certain time of my life.

Title: A song to someone
Post by: Holly on September 30, 2003, 08:54:58 pm

thats great Bianca! :)

Title: A song to someone
Post by: jlmusicchick on October 03, 2003, 12:36:15 pm

lmao at first i thought "it's sad and sucky too" was part of the song, and i was thinking how that didn't fit the poem at all. :-P wow i can be a complete ditz sometimes.

I really like it! it's true, and how you're feeling, which can never be 'crappy' or anything like that.

Title: A song to someone
Post by: Ms.Redd on October 03, 2003, 12:40:57 pm

Its good and I too know just how you feel....

I like it, since I can relate to it.... And hee hee, I didn't think "its sad and sucky" was part of the song, but even if it was, it would still fit because to feel like that IS sad and sucky....

Good song. Do you have audio?

Title: A song to someone
Post by: Mountaineer on October 03, 2003, 06:51:15 pm

Quote from: "Ms.Redd"

Its good and I too know just how you feel....

I like it, since I can relate to it.... And hee hee, I didn't think "its sad and sucky" was part of the song, but even if it was, it would still fit because to feel like that IS sad and sucky....

Good song. Do you have audio?

i havent recorded it but it has music

im not sure of it so i wount record for awhile

Title: A song to someone
Post by: VanessaLover03 on October 12, 2003, 10:34:50 pm

the words are so true