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Title: look to an indifferent sky
Post by: badsrx7 on October 17, 2003, 10:55:17 pm

a string of heartless melodies stretch into the sky
we look for our will up there when we've lost it
yet seldom do find it.
and then we lose everything we have left.
we look to a sad line to fill the void,
and then to an abandoned house
to leave us alone and divert our last
thoughts to oblivion.
thoughts we'd never divulge.
thoughts we've never harbored (and, in truth, never will again.)
thoughts as good as gone (but very much alive.)
thoughts (nonetheless.)
and as a blade runs through a soul (already dying,)
once pure and fresh skin
turns black
charred and tired.

Title: ummm
Post by: Alecs on October 17, 2003, 11:25:47 pm

"we look to a sad line to fill the void,
and then to an abandoned house
to leave us alone and divert our last
thoughts to oblivion."

wow... phat lines... 8O

Title: Re: ummm
Post by: badsrx7 on October 17, 2003, 11:40:28 pm

Nah!

lol

Title: Re: ummm
Post by: Alecs on October 19, 2003, 11:41:39 am

Quote from: "badsrx7"

Nah!

lol

screw NAH! it's good you silly rabbit! :wink:

Title: look to an indifferent sky
Post by: VanessaLover03 on October 26, 2003, 12:05:23 pm

its great

Title: look to an indifferent sky
Post by: badsrx7 on October 26, 2003, 12:13:36 pm

Thank youu!

YOU are great! ;D