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Title: Brave
Post by: MyLifeIsLikeATM on December 29, 2003, 10:16:13 pm

I dont think i've posted any of my poems here before. i write poems all the time. this one i wrote on Christmas. Its not that great, but if u read it right it seems to flow. Just thought I'd share, and test out this part of the board.

Brave

If I could tell you just one thing
If I were brave
And gave this up
If I came through
And just told you
What would I get?
With condescending time
Even if I left
You behind
How would I feel?
How could I win?
And be okay
Everyday
If only I was brave
And just could say
I love you

Title: Brave
Post by: Mountaineer on December 29, 2003, 10:38:20 pm

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8O

very deep

i love it!!!!

Title: Brave
Post by: MyLifeIsLikeATM on December 30, 2003, 11:57:01 am

thank you  :)