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Title: Rise Above
Post by: Chloe on January 07, 2004, 04:45:01 pm
okay... i was extremely upset the other night and just started writing. don't laugh!!!

i try to wipe the tears away
but they keep coming back
i try to stand up on my own
but i fall back to the floor
that you left me to die on
i'm lying cold, alone and bruised
and i don't think you even care

but i'll keep trying to fly again
til i spread my broken wings and soar
i'll find a way to be happy again
even if i can't have you
i'm not saying it's gonna be easy
but you have to sink a little
before you rise above

i remain on the floor
but thing aren't as bad
as they once seemed
and yes i still cry
but i'm not as torn as before
slowly i rebuild my mind
and teach it to live alone
but now i'm starting
to rise up off the ground

i'm not saying it's gonna be easy
and i'm not saying it's gonna be tough
sometimes life seems more than
just a little rough
but you have to sink a little
before you rise above
Title: Rise Above
Post by: xxjenniferxx on January 07, 2004, 04:54:22 pm
its great and i mean that too...
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Manda on January 07, 2004, 05:09:26 pm
I liked it, I liked that Chloe, really good job!

Manda :wink:
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Chloe on January 07, 2004, 08:15:29 pm
thanks Manda!! it's amazing what a little depressed episode will do to your poetic side, huh?
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Manda on January 07, 2004, 08:48:49 pm
LMAO
aww your just down on your troubles! heehee

but you do write really good poems and things.

 :D

Manda
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Chloe on January 08, 2004, 11:03:49 am
thanks guys  :D
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Tia on January 08, 2004, 11:36:34 am
That was great Chloe! If you go back a while in the CD section you'll find a few of mine too... :wink:
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Chloe on January 08, 2004, 11:56:20 am
i just went and read "just another day". awesome shtuff there!!
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Tia on January 08, 2004, 02:33:10 pm
Quote from: "AFallingStar"
i just went and read "just another day". awesome shtuff there!!


Thanks! :D

Yours is pretty hot too! :razz:
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Chloe on January 08, 2004, 03:41:00 pm
Quote from: "Tia"
Quote from: "AFallingStar"
i just went and read "just another day". awesome shtuff there!!


Thanks! :D

Yours is pretty hot too! :razz:


thanks again! lol  :)
Title: Rise Above
Post by: Tia on January 09, 2004, 10:51:23 am
Quote from: "AFallingStar"
Quote from: "Tia"
Quote from: "AFallingStar"
i just went and read "just another day". awesome shtuff there!!


Thanks! :D

Yours is pretty hot too! :razz:


thanks again! lol  :)


Anytime... :)