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Other Topics => Creative Endeavors => Topic started by: Chloe on January 07, 2004, 04:45:01 pm
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okay... i was extremely upset the other night and just started writing. don't laugh!!!
i try to wipe the tears away
but they keep coming back
i try to stand up on my own
but i fall back to the floor
that you left me to die on
i'm lying cold, alone and bruised
and i don't think you even care
but i'll keep trying to fly again
til i spread my broken wings and soar
i'll find a way to be happy again
even if i can't have you
i'm not saying it's gonna be easy
but you have to sink a little
before you rise above
i remain on the floor
but thing aren't as bad
as they once seemed
and yes i still cry
but i'm not as torn as before
slowly i rebuild my mind
and teach it to live alone
but now i'm starting
to rise up off the ground
i'm not saying it's gonna be easy
and i'm not saying it's gonna be tough
sometimes life seems more than
just a little rough
but you have to sink a little
before you rise above
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its great and i mean that too...
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I liked it, I liked that Chloe, really good job!
Manda :wink:
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thanks Manda!! it's amazing what a little depressed episode will do to your poetic side, huh?
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LMAO
aww your just down on your troubles! heehee
but you do write really good poems and things.
:D
Manda
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thanks guys :D
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That was great Chloe! If you go back a while in the CD section you'll find a few of mine too... :wink:
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i just went and read "just another day". awesome shtuff there!!
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i just went and read "just another day". awesome shtuff there!!
Thanks! :D
Yours is pretty hot too! :razz:
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i just went and read "just another day". awesome shtuff there!!
Thanks! :D
Yours is pretty hot too! :razz:
thanks again! lol :)
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i just went and read "just another day". awesome shtuff there!!
Thanks! :D
Yours is pretty hot too! :razz:
thanks again! lol :)
Anytime... :)