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Title: Untitled Yo
Post by: jlmusicchick on January 28, 2004, 07:01:08 pm
yeah...no title once again..

I woke up screaming
Tearing at my bed sheets
From a nightmare.
I dreamed that I was you
Every particle
And gene
That’s yours had become
Me.
I was bitter and
Lovely
And
Gracious with a
Need to be self righteous.

I woke up screaming,
Because I
wasn’t dreaming anymore.
I was me
And every particle
And gene that’s mine was
Me.
I wanted to be bitter and
lovely
and
gracious with a
need to be self righteous.
I wanted to be sure
that I wouldn’t be lonely
anymore.

yes. that's all. it's bad. :-P i wrote another one that's too bad to even post. i'll do some editing though
Title: Untitled Yo
Post by: LimeTwister on January 28, 2004, 07:19:43 pm
I LOVE IT!

 :D it's the kind of poetry i like though, the whole I was, I'm not stuff...kinda like some of the cranberries stuff.
Title: Untitled Yo
Post by: jlmusicchick on January 28, 2004, 07:24:44 pm
thanks  :)  lmao, i thought you meant that it was like cranberries, as in the fruit (is cranberries really a fruit? does it grown on a vine? these everyday things puzzle me..) and i was like "wtf is joey smokin these days?" and then i understood what you meant. i love the cranberries. To the Faithful Departed is one of my favorite albums!
Title: Untitled Yo
Post by: LimeTwister on January 28, 2004, 07:30:19 pm
lmao!!

well I was listening to a burned mix CD i put together of the cranberries earlier...I guess thats what made me think of them..

I think they are a fruit.
Title: Untitled Yo
Post by: jlmusicchick on January 28, 2004, 07:36:36 pm
Quote from: "LimeTwister"
I think they are a fruit.


lol, good to know. i was actually going to look it up on google, but now i don't have to :-P oh my, i might as well walk around with "dork" written on my foorhead  :lol:
Title: Untitled Yo
Post by: Mountaineer on January 29, 2004, 01:42:35 pm
ITS GREAT!

just how im feeling right now
Title: Untitled Yo
Post by: jlmusicchick on January 29, 2004, 01:45:56 pm
Quote from: "VCfreak"
ITS GREAT!

just how im feeling right now


Oh Bee *hugs* don't worry, things will work out! just give it time!
Title: Untitled Yo
Post by: Mountaineer on January 29, 2004, 01:48:06 pm
yeah i guess