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Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: sweetdang on February 03, 2004, 06:33:04 pm
“Ana speaks slow and quiet”
There is a song
that some hear
when seeing their face
in porcelain,
or their lies
in mirrors.
Striving for an absolute
they can never reach.
Starving for a perfection
they will never find.
Ana sings slow and quiet
while showing dolls;
many plastic passions.
When Ana crescendos
the world falls away
into a pulse machine
and healers words.
But after the tune,
in Ana’s silence,
all that’s left is
a wire frame and
a half beating heart.
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: clamicas on February 03, 2004, 06:42:27 pm
wow!! I liked it ;) :D
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: sweetdang on February 03, 2004, 06:43:45 pm
Quote from: "clamicas"
wow!! I liked it ;) :D


Thanks a bunch. ; )
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: topher8467 on February 03, 2004, 07:42:05 pm
Hey Crissy,

Might I know Anna?

T.
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: Tia on February 04, 2004, 06:38:50 am
Awesome... 8O

I love it.
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: divasteph on February 04, 2004, 07:00:03 am
thats one of the best i have read on here --- bravo!
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: clamicas on February 04, 2004, 07:17:08 am
Quote from: "divasteph"
thats one of the best i have read on here --- bravo!

yup, exactly (http://www.christinamultimedia.com/forum/smilies/smilies/rock.gif)
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: c'estlavie on February 04, 2004, 10:33:24 am
wow!!

that is so cool! well done sweetie

love ya

Lisa xxx

ps. reply to my emails!! :)
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: rosieposy87 on February 04, 2004, 11:02:50 am
Oh i really really liked it, the rhythm is good- in line with the mood of the poem. Seriously, its really good.
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: vanessafan18 on February 04, 2004, 11:59:53 am
Wow I loved that it was so good! Well done!

xoxoxox
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: sweetdang on February 04, 2004, 02:09:31 pm
;- ) Thanks guys..Tia, Steph, Lisa, Clamicas (again), Rosie & Vanessafan.

Nah, T.  I don't think so...Though not anorexic myself, I really feel for those suffering, that's what this poem is about.
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: Gina on February 04, 2004, 02:22:18 pm
Wow... thats really good Cris! Nice work hunnie!
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: Tia on February 04, 2004, 02:24:46 pm
You're welcome C! *hugs*

Haven't talked to you much lately...where've you been gurl?!
Title: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
Post by: jlmusicchick on February 04, 2004, 04:16:01 pm
that's awesome!