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Other Topics => Creative Endeavors => Topic started by: c'estlavie on April 02, 2004, 12:00:45 pm
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if anyone cud think of a name for this i wud be very grateful...
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There it goes again.....
Another piece of a friendship made to be broken
Blown away by lies and deceit
How long will this Jeckyll and Hyde act last?
How long until you see how much i love you?
I'll never stop loving you
I'm not sure i could if i tried
Without you i am empty
You make me believe there is more to life
I try to understand you
I guess i take the wrong path on the way
Cos all i find are dead ends
And bridges that i cant cross
I feel so helpless
All i can tell you is how much i care
But still we stand and watch
As another piece falls away
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Lisa xxx
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cool :D
u could call it "Broken", "How Long'',
"braking" "Watch(ing) it brake" i don't know i'm kinda bad with names :lol:
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ok, i think im callin it "Broken". it was kinda the first thing that came into my head anyway, i just wasnt really sure about it. thanks for all ur suggestions. it was really nice of ya.
Lisa xxx
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Awww Lisa honey that is sooo touching! You little poet ess you! Broken is a really good name for it I agree!
xoxoxox
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awwwwww thankyou georgie, ur so adorable, hehe. its really not that great, i just felt i needed to put it somewhere else instead of it just lyin about on my bedroom floor. lol
cos knowing me i wud have probably lost it, hehe
*mwah*
Love ya hun
Lisa xxx
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*puts hand over heart*
lovely! :oops:
Manda
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:) aww bless ya manda, hehe such a sweetie. glad u liked it *hugs*
Lisa xxx
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How about, "endship"...?
tylor
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cool :D
u could call it "Broken", "How Long'',
"braking" "Watch(ing) it brake" i don't know i'm kinda bad with names :lol:
agreed i like it!!! good job :D
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:) thanks so much for all ur suggestions ppl, im glad some of u like it. i think im stickin wit "Broken". its just kinda simple and doesnt distract from the meaning of the poem.
i really appreciate ppl reading it tho
thanks again
Lisa xxx