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Title: my sky
Post by: Chloe on May 03, 2004, 05:23:50 pm

just a short one...

In his eyes i've seen my sky
In my dreams, i've held him a thousand times
I wish he knew what he means to me
But i get the feeling he'll never ever see
How much he makes my heart bleed
It's like he doesn't know I'm there
He wouldn't even hear me if i was screaming
sometimes i wonder why i waste my time
but i'm afraid if i run away he won't follow me
I need to get over this
Before it decays what's left of me

Title: my sky
Post by: Tia on May 04, 2004, 06:45:37 am

:cry:

Title: my sky
Post by: rosieposy87 on May 05, 2004, 10:14:37 am

I like the way it doesn't rhyme the whole way through.

Title: my sky
Post by: vanessafan18 on May 05, 2004, 10:21:52 am

I'm with T, makes you so tearful! That is soo powerful Chloe, nice work!!!

xox

Title: my sky
Post by: Chloe on May 05, 2004, 02:24:02 pm

thanks guys...  :)

Rosie... yeah i just noticed that! hmmm...

Title: my sky
Post by: Mountaineer on May 05, 2004, 03:14:29 pm

OMG!! BEAUTIFULL!  :cry:

Title: my sky
Post by: Alecs on May 10, 2004, 08:39:32 am

sad but great poetry :)