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Other Topics => Creative Endeavors => Topic started by: Tia on May 15, 2004, 07:07:57 am
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At least I think that's what I'll call it... :?
Looking up at a bright blue sky
Tears run down her face
And she's wondering why
Why everything has to be this way
Why she has to fight to live
Through every day
Looking in to a dark, cold room
Hidden and far away
She can sense the doom
Here to stay
And there are no windows
There are no doors
No way in for the light
No way out for the sores
And she cries
And she cries
'Til her eyes run dry
And she bleeds
And she screams
Still wondering why
She remembers looking up at a bright blue sky
She remembers giving in to the lie
She remembers living
She discovers what it's like to die
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that's beautiful, veryyy depressive though :cry:
But well done ;)
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OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!
:cry:
That makes me thinkg about someone and he knows who he is
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Tia- very good but also worrying. I know how absoloutely horrid it must be. It would make a lovely song.
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Thanks Clarice and Bee <3
Tia- very good but also worrying. I know how absoloutely horrid it must be. It would make a lovely song.
Thanks. We share our misery... :wink: Actually, it's not very funny, it's always a bad sign when I start writing. It means I'm depressed - which I am. Very much so :roll:
Buuut, you'd never guess - it's my first song with proper piano with it!! (I had to rearrange the lyrics a little) I must record :D :D :D
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Yeah! Record it! That would be great to hear, and an output for when you're stuck at home. I'm sorry its so horrid for you tia, we've got to get you out of this rut!!
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Thanks Clarice and Bee <3
Tia- very good but also worrying. I know how absoloutely horrid it must be. It would make a lovely song.
Thanks. We share our misery... :wink: Actually, it's not very funny, it's always a bad sign when I start writing. It means I'm depressed - which I am. Very much so :roll:
Buuut, you'd never guess - it's my first song with proper piano with it!! (I had to rearrange the lyrics a little) I must record :D :D :D
Awww Tia, I am so sorry, it must be so tough I can not imagine *hug*. I hope you get better. That song is sooooo beautiful I would love to hear the recording, and I bet it sounds so pretty with piano. Nice job Tia!! Take care <3 xoxox
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Yeah! Record it! That would be great to hear, and an output for when you're stuck at home. I'm sorry its so horrid for you tia, we've got to get you out of this rut!!
Only problem is, I need to fix up a way to record the piano part, and I have no ideas lol. And yeah, ruts...not so good. Getting out would help :roll:
Thanks G *hugs* You guys are all so great. It's appreciated <3
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Positive thinking has been proven to significantly increase your likelihood of recovering! In Greer's study she found that women who took positive approaches to being diagnosed with breast cancer were ALL free of cancer 6 months later, and 5 years later- but the women with negative outlooks weren't.
Sorry...pyschology revision is driving me mad. lol
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Haha.
Kinda ironic how it's hard to stay positive, don't ya think?
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Ahhhhh Tia it's fantabulous! But yeah, depressing... I would sooooooo wanna hear it with the piano and stuff!!! It would be awesome if you would record it. :D :D
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Thanks hun <3