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Other Topics => Creative Endeavors => Topic started by: PIBby on June 19, 2004, 08:46:39 pm
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It's not a good place to start, when you're falling asleep.
A week has passed, and a pack a day doesn't help.
Well, it's been a week, and "smoking's gay,"
But so is this, so anyway, I'm the only one standing in shower,
And since you never called, I'll rinse this all away.
Another drop of water rolled down your skin and hurt my eyes.
I'm tired of seeing these mirrors,
Because I'm aware that something's wrong with me.
I'd guess my goal is to see how long I go without missing you.
But then another candle was blown out, and another fight began.
I'm convinced that solid ground's calling, but all I hear is sand.
And then the music stops. And I don't know what to write.
I've figured something's wrong, but I won't call you tonight.
This overwhelming feeling of loss controls my head,
It surfaced my body, and I don't know what you said.
Still, I've found another way to bury it in my brain.
But I don't know what to do to rinse this all away.
So fall asleep, and forget me, and let your memories run.
They fall out and decay, like another useless tooth.
Was the surface tougher than you thought?
I've figured something's wrong, but I won't call you tonight.
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That is so amazing! And not just for someone your age. Of course, all of your stuff is. How did you get into writing, and did you take special writing courses or someothing?
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Amazing! That is so powerful. Cece is EXTREMELY talented and clever, I could never write that good!xoxo
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Thank you.
How did you get into writing, and did you take special writing courses or someothing?
Ummm . . . I just started writing; Geoff Rickly, Conor Oberst, and Stephan Jenkins are my influences, so they have a lot to do with my desire to start writing. I never took classes. So thanks. ;)
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Amazing! That is so powerful.
Yeah, and it really flows too...
Cece, my dear, you are amazing.
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Thank you.
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But so is this, so anyway, I'm the only one standing in shower,
And since you never called, I'll rinse this all away.
Another drop of water rolled down your skin and hurt my eyes.
I'm tired of seeing these mirrors,
Because I'm aware that something's wrong with me.
I'd guess my goal is to see how long I go without missing you.
But then another candle was blown out, and another fight began.
I'm convinced that solid ground's calling, but all I hear is sand.
^ that's my favorite part :-) good job cece
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Thank you.
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Cece, you need to put a book out. I will camp out at Barnes and Noble to buy it. That was simply amazing. You have a way with words... It's simply amazing.