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Title: New York Wanted
Post by: PIBby on June 24, 2004, 10:25:00 am

Come on, and say that you don't really care.
I lost you on Tuesday, but it's Wednesday, now.
You don't understand what it feels like,
When I'm letting go of all this that has come between us.
New York wanted "more than what I could offer."
You set the alarm as I was leaving.
But can I come back in?
Too many glasses of wine couldn't even help me see.
Now, I'm crawling on my knees at your feet.
Change your mind.
The clock will give you much more time to come onto me.
And it's raining, but my outside's dry.
All of this wanted more than what I could offer.
You set the alarm as I was leaving.
But can I come back in?
And these pews are empty, but the Altar's set.
And everything's working, but I can't move.
And to say that I wanted to stay here much longer,
Can I say that? That I don't want to leave?
New York wanted "more than what I could offer."
You set the alarm as I was leaving.
But can I come back?
And it's raining, but my outside's dry.

Title: New York Wanted
Post by: vanessafan18 on June 24, 2004, 11:11:49 am

Once again, that is pure wonderfulness, you know you should publish your poems they're great! I love the theme too!xoxo

Title: New York Wanted
Post by: PIBby on June 24, 2004, 11:42:57 am

Thanks

Title: New York Wanted
Post by: jlmusicchick on June 24, 2004, 11:58:08 am

awesome cece :-) very much relatable :-/

Title: New York Wanted
Post by: PIBby on June 24, 2004, 12:11:41 pm

Thank you.

Title: New York Wanted
Post by: Tia on June 25, 2004, 10:33:43 am

Quote from: "vanessafan18"

Once again, that is pure wonderfulness

Couldn't have said it better myself

Title: New York Wanted
Post by: vanessafan18 on June 25, 2004, 11:28:36 am

Quote from: "PIBby"

Thanks

You're most welcome Cece dear  :)


xxx

Title: New York Wanted
Post by: Alecs on June 27, 2004, 10:13:08 am

that was really really good 8O

*sits dumbfounded...*

Title: New York Wanted
Post by: drumpad on June 30, 2004, 08:54:35 am

that was just sick! (and i mean that in a very very good way) u def. need to keep writing