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Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: PIBby on June 24, 2004, 05:13:02 pm: I left this. I left it all for you,
Including the cigarette on that windowsill.
It's still burning. But is this still burning?
I hope that you hear this,
Through the purposely cracked bedroom door:
"I think that all this has burned through my memories,
Through my memories of . . . Shhh."
So I hope at your funeral, I can give a speech.
Maybe after I talk (with no one listening),
I'll lie in your coffin with you, because it's just another bed.
And recite the words of the brain of that stereo -
I want you to notice when I'm not around,
Because you're not around and I swear I've noticed.
All that your wanted was something more than this.
And some living, breathing prototype leaves me searching my lips,
For a kiss I lost, that I think you never gave to me.
To say I need a band-aid,
Wouldn't it be apaprent over everything I'm wearing, and over my heart?
But some living, breathing prototype,
Strips all these photographs from an album that you gave to me.
And that record keeps playing,
So break another one when I notice you're gone - for how long?
Spend time alone,
Once I've noticed you've been gone for quite some time now.
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: snapple936 on June 24, 2004, 05:15:51 pm: freaking cece, that is AMAZING. i swear for a young person like yourself you SHOULD NOT be able to produce these thoughts... what are you, a SUPER GENIUS!?!?!?!?!??! :-) i <3 you
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: PIBby on June 24, 2004, 05:16:47 pm: Thank you. And I love you, too, my favourite Connecticut friend!

But I'm not a genius :(
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: snapple936 on June 24, 2004, 05:18:14 pm: welllll i think you are, and REALLY my opinion is the ONLY opinion that matters. RIGHT!? haha ok i'm jk.

ok no i'm not really kidding.

yes i am
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: PIBby on June 24, 2004, 05:25:48 pm: :D Of course your opinion is the only one that counts when you compliment me!

Just kidding.

I love you.
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: clamicas on June 24, 2004, 06:38:56 pm: I think you are very unique, :D seriously, you've criated your own style, always touching the dark sarcastic side ;)and never falling in the clichés that sometimes ppl get trpped in.
Really good!!!!! I'm always impressed :D
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: Jophess on June 24, 2004, 06:44:34 pm: I agee, you have your own style. And I love it! I want a book, damn it! THAT is true talent.
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: PIBby on June 24, 2004, 06:57:36 pm: Thank you . . .
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: Jophess on June 24, 2004, 07:06:38 pm: Cece, I went to your archive or sorts of poems, and I just read them for about 45 minutes. Your words are so powerful, so amazing....

PS : Get on IM, quick!
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: MyLifeIsLikeATM on June 24, 2004, 07:37:11 pm: Cece, i reeeeeeeally like that! its a great poem!
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: PIBby on June 24, 2004, 08:12:33 pm: Thank you
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: Tia on June 25, 2004, 10:36:35 am: The things you do with words... 8O
Title: And then there was Radiohead
Post by: vanessafan18 on June 25, 2004, 11:25:12 am: Quote from: "snapple936"
freaking cece, that is AMAZING. i swear for a young person like yourself you SHOULD NOT be able to produce these thoughts... what are you, a SUPER GENIUS!?!?!?!?!??! :-) i <3 you

I totally agree you have such a wonderful genius talent there!!!xx