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Title: Smile
Post by: drumpad on July 09, 2004, 12:56:31 pm

I know we fight like cats and dogs
I know I say things that hurt you
I know we barely see each other
But I want you to smile when you think of me
I'd do anything for ya, and you know that
and just for that, i wanna see those beautiful lips
make that expressive curve
how I love when you think of me and smile
the way you tilt your head and wave
It's just like the world doesn't exist
free-floating down an endless stream of bliss
It's better than any cloud nine you can sit upon
Working a 9-5 job, going home everyday
It feels as if i have nothing else to live for
But then the thought of you sets my soul on fire
and my stomach flurrying, and I smile for you
won't you do the same for me?

Title: Smile
Post by: dconfessional on October 13, 2004, 12:26:41 pm

That sounds like a song to me! I love the detail in it. Like, I can imagine exactly what you're talking about. It's good. I like it

Title: Smile
Post by: drumpad on November 15, 2004, 07:44:49 pm

thanks dawg. I tries, I tries..