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Title: Will I ever trust you?
Post by: Mountaineer on July 15, 2004, 02:16:09 pm

It was a Sunday morning,
I woke up at 9:15,
thinking about a countless thing
It was eating me inside,
I finally had some time
to sort this out…in my mind

(chorus)
The blazing sun made me think again
are we meant to be??
If I fall down,
will you be the one to help me up??
Will I ever trust you again?

waking up from the deep sleep,
I got out of bed
and started to make my day
with no energy,
but really wanted to figure what this all meant

(chorus)
(bridge)
You were everthing that I wanted
but we werent meant to be
those memories just haunt me
You just need to fade away

(chorus)

Will I ever trust you?
WIll I ever trust?
Will I ever trust you....
Again

Title: Will I ever trust you?
Post by: dconfessional on October 12, 2004, 01:36:42 pm

Wow! Do you come up with a rhythm and music and everything? I sometimes write songs, but I've been meaning to look for guitar lessons and piano lessons. You're really good. You write so realistically.

Title: Will I ever trust you?
Post by: Afterglow on December 19, 2004, 06:46:57 pm

Wow.. I liked it a lot...But I wouldn't call it " WILL I EVER TRUST YOU ", I'd call TRUST YOU, it's short and basic... but ok.. good lyrics;... keep writting