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Title: Superbowls Below Eighty
Post by: PIBby on August 20, 2004, 07:12:45 pm
I move from blonde to brown so easily.
And I say that nothing's going wrong.
But I move from blue to green so easily.
I swam from Ireland to Spain.

But do you see that something's going on, now,
Because it's almost Fall, without you on my . . .
And I miss you from six to three, because it's not Fall.

I move from eyes to smile so easily.
And you say ths never meant a thing.
I move from voice to laugh so easily.
I move from touch to  touched so easily.

Leaves are dying but something growing for you, in my . . .
You know it's only 10:15 right now?
Well, this Fall you know that we're all playing football,
In the rectory yard . . . But only if you come.

I move from books. And I move from hands.
I move from falling perfectly to just tying it all up.
I move to personality. I'm moving to the perect contrast,
Of whose skin on who?
I move to bookstores, short of change.
But you know you've both got me tied up,
And I don't know .
You know I could never choose between blue or those green eyes.

You've got me so tied up . . .
Title: Superbowls Below Eighty
Post by: Jophess on August 20, 2004, 07:45:09 pm
Perfectemente.
Title: Superbowls Below Eighty
Post by: clamicas on August 21, 2004, 09:02:28 am
^I agree :wink:
Title: Superbowls Below Eighty
Post by: LimeTwister on August 21, 2004, 08:21:19 pm
is this like the other poems??

If you need to talk, I will hopefully be on.

Loved it, as I love you. (In that related-sort-of way)
Title: Superbowls Below Eighty
Post by: Tia on August 22, 2004, 10:49:29 am
Work of art.

I love the way you always use 'fall'. It's such a perfect season for your writing. Or is it just always fall in Kentucky? :wink:
Title: Superbowls Below Eighty
Post by: PIBby on August 22, 2004, 12:32:10 pm
Quote from: "LimeTwister"
is this like the other poems??


:\ Sometimes . . . O_o

And thank you, guys.

Tia, it's actually really cold right now. Still, not cool enough. But no, it's not always Fall here; I just love the season. ;)
Title: Superbowls Below Eighty
Post by: Tia on August 24, 2004, 05:27:11 am
Quote from: "PIBby"
Tia, it's actually really cold right now. Still, not cool enough. But no, it's not always Fall here; I just love the season. ;)


Hehe...okie dokie :wink:
I love autumn too :)
Title: Superbowls Below Eighty
Post by: LimeTwister on August 24, 2004, 02:58:57 pm
me three...Fall that is ;).