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Title: Clarity
Post by: VaderDawsn on September 22, 2004, 10:40:51 am

Clarity

Clarity finally after 2 years of your haze.
How my love for you left me drowning in a malaise.
It is clear now that I just played a part in your fairy tale dreams.
Nothing really was at all what it seemed.

Clarity finally after three call backs and auditions.
You've cast another lady in your tale of doom.
It is clear now that you offered a disingenuous happiness.
Reading lines from your tried and true script.

Clarity finally after 2 years of your haze.
How my love for you left me drowning in a malaise.
It is clear now that I just played a part in your fairy tale dreams.
Nothing really was at all what it seemed.

Clarity finally after a storm of tears.
I have nothing left to fear.
Go on and spin your web of affection and deception.
But here, you will never again find a warm reception.

Title: Clarity
Post by: clamicas on September 22, 2004, 12:06:50 pm

I liked it :D

great job :D

Title: Clarity
Post by: Tia on September 22, 2004, 12:10:40 pm

Nice. So many big words :D

Title: Clarity
Post by: VaderDawsn on September 22, 2004, 12:42:38 pm

aww...Thanks :)  

I was able to get out emotion and still have some organization.