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Title: My Usual Places (poem)
Post by: divasteph on January 11, 2005, 03:51:23 am

I'll be in my Usual Places
Singing the songs Ive always sang
I'll be in the usual Places
you can find me there on days like these,
on days where I feel so alone
I'll be where I have always been
Right TherE in Your StuPid LitTle HeaRt
I'll be crying in the corner
SLAP a band-aid on me & heal me UP
Don't bother me
I'll be where I am on days That end in "Y"

Stephanie 01/05

Title: My Usual Places (poem)
Post by: Afterglow on January 11, 2005, 04:57:15 am

Hmm... I liked it, but it's just too short...

Title: My Usual Places (poem)
Post by: clamicas on January 12, 2005, 03:39:18 pm

short but efficient in a gentle way :wink:

Quote

SLAP a band-aid on me & heal me UP
Don't bother me
I'll be where I am on days That end in "Y"

^my fav part :D

Title: good good very good
Post by: wile-e-coyote on January 15, 2005, 01:56:39 am

:0)

Title: My Usual Places (poem)
Post by: BK3100 on January 16, 2005, 09:33:39 pm

I like it!

Title: Re:
Post by: Julie on May 05, 2005, 07:50:21 am

I really like this poem.  Good job.