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Title: Fragility
Post by: Zloska_of_yy on March 04, 2005, 05:05:18 am

This is one of the first songlyrics I have written, hope you enjoy it

He was looking at the sun
and his mind was covered in shadows
his eyes were burning bright
he wished he could see
what he was meant to be

and now he's screaming
he's screaming at the dark
can't you hear him, please listen
and now he's breaking can't you see
he is shaking into pieces
into pieces

he has a heavy heart to carry
but his hands are already shattered
the weight is breaking his back
he longs to say it all
but he's not ready to fall

and now he's screaming
he's screaming at the dark
can't you hear him, please listen
and now he's breaking can't you see
he is shaking into pieces
into pieces

there are cracks on his face now
cracks in the mirror
but averted eyes do not see
and the ignorant do not hear
that he is drowning
slowly drowning
in a sea of black

and now he's screaming
he's screaming at the dark
can't you hear him, please listen
and now he's breaking can't you see
he is shaking into pieces
into pieces

he was looking at the sun
and his mind was covered in shadows

Title: Fragility
Post by: Afterglow on March 04, 2005, 07:41:50 am

Wow.. That's really really nice...
Hmm...

No name you can give it?
I think it's INTO PIECES

Title: Re:
Post by: Julie on May 05, 2005, 07:27:31 am

I really like the contrast and pattern between the light and dark.  It's really beautiful.