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Title: Just Give In
Post by: Ms.Redd on January 13, 2007, 02:45:48 pm

Somehow
This girls always doing
Things that she shouldn't
Putting herself where
Her feet just don't fit
She's running in circles
And the blaming the others
Trying to find
But she just can't commit

And all of the words she thinks
Are all of the things she means
But what good is thinking
Without ever speaking
Or gestures to show she knows it?

Someday
She promises herself
She'll give what she wants to
Giving, receiving
A big part of life
Not standing in silence
Exhausted resilence
Finding whats in her
To say she loves it

And all of the words she thinks
Are all of the things she means
But what good is thinking
Without ever speaking
Or gestures to show she knows it

And she'll give in someday
She'll give up someway
And tell what she thinks
Without the resistance
And just give in


( I'm open to opinions and thoughts from others. ;) )

Title: Just Give In
Post by: me and my piano---tim on January 14, 2007, 03:25:43 am

hmmm I like it! I really like the "Not standing in silence
Exhausted resilence" line especially. Although, I am confused as to what's going on in the girl's head... :?