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Post by: CaliGirl20 on April 06, 2003, 11:34:30 pm

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I close my eyes

Everything around me moves so fast
I take a deep breath and things slow down
All of my anxieties have finally past

I open my eyes

People are staring, clapping, and screaming
I try to sing but no sound is heard
They all respond to what I am doing

I take a few steps forward

I try and try, but I don't hear a thing
My heart beats so fast I can hardly breathe
Although I don't hear, the audience does, so I continue to sing

I walk off stage

I'm in a daze and I don't know what's happened
Before I know it my time is up
I take a seat and my senses awaken

I enter my car

It's been a year and nothing's changed
My nerves and anxieties have not ceased
When I get on stage I still feel strange

I'm on the phone

My friend tells me it's just a phase
I consider his opinion, although I don't know
that I can take the frustration for many more days

I'm at home

I think about the year I've had
It's all too much for me to take
I decide to quit and for once I'm glad

I'm free



Ya'll may think this sucks and it's stupid, but that's ok.  I just felt like posting something on here.  I wrote this a really long time ago so feel free to say bad shit about it if you want to.

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Post by: Kim on April 07, 2003, 02:36:13 am

i'm loving it!

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Post by: Afterglow on December 05, 2004, 04:40:38 pm

Hey there.. .Good job... I thnk it is perfect

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Post by: BK3100 on December 06, 2004, 08:11:01 pm

yeah, i thought it was good!

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Post by: Afterglow on December 19, 2004, 06:52:03 pm

Well, I'd call it FREE TO DECIDE
 :razz: Now, it's with you