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Title: Murder
Post by: LimeTwister on April 07, 2003, 11:18:56 am

(please don't go psycho, or think I am psycho, and don't commit suicide, just cause this girl didn't know what she wanted.)

Murder

She wrote murder with her fist,
She wrote murder with her knife,
She wrote murder with her love,
She wrote murder with her life.

She was born to be free,
But she needed some help some way,
Before she could just be free
She wanted everything to seem,
So real, To bleed.

She couldn't love she couldn't speak,
She needed to be free,
Single and flying,
but she wanted it to be real,
She wanted to bleed.

She wrote murder with her fist,
She wrote murder with her knife,
She wrote murder with her love,
She wrote murder with her life.

She loved to love,
She hated to love
She was just born to be free,
She wanted so bad a family,
But she'd just love to be free.

She always hated to be free,
So she wanted to feel real,
She wanted to bleed,
Deep down she wanted to be real,
Deep down she wanted to bleed.

She wrote murder with her fist,
She wrote murder with her knife,
She wrote murder with her love,
She wrote murder with her life.

(She just wanted to be real, she just wanted to bleed)

She wrote murder with her fist,
She wrote murder with her knife,
She wrote murder with her love,
She wrote murder with her life.

-Joseph Eckstrom

Title: Murder
Post by: TSE on April 07, 2003, 11:21:13 am

Now where have I seen this before?  :wink:

Title: Murder
Post by: LimeTwister on April 07, 2003, 11:23:56 am

I sent it to ya, morbid girl.

Title: Murder
Post by: LimeTwister on April 07, 2003, 11:24:17 am

did you ever get that sig done?

Title: Murder
Post by: TSE on April 07, 2003, 11:28:07 am

Quote from: "LimeTwister"

I sent it to ya, morbid girl.

I am certainly NOT morbid!

Errrr, mostly kinda sorta a little bit . . .

Title: Murder
Post by: Jophess on April 07, 2003, 12:05:14 pm

That's good Limey! Love it!

Title: Murder
Post by: CheapandEvilgrl on April 07, 2003, 12:50:19 pm

wow
really awesome! I especially love the refrain/chorus part!
guess that makes me morbid too...but i already knew that.

Title: Murder
Post by: Jophess on April 07, 2003, 12:53:41 pm

Quote from: "CheapandEvilgrl"

wow
really awesome! I especially love the refrain/chorus part!
guess that makes me morbid too...but i already knew that.

LOL, I am not really morbid... umm...

 :twisted:

Title: Murder
Post by: LostDwarf on April 07, 2003, 03:54:09 pm

Holla, nice one =)

Title: Murder
Post by: PIBby on May 28, 2003, 01:33:24 pm

Joey!! I didn't know you were such a poet! I like it. :)

Title: Murder
Post by: LimeTwister on May 28, 2003, 03:20:54 pm

Quote from: "PIBby"

Joey!! I didn't know you were such a poet! I like it. :)

thats because I'm not.

Title: Murder
Post by: Ms.Redd on May 29, 2003, 06:49:29 am

nice... I can sorta relate but I'm not going to kill myself.  :?

Title: Murder
Post by: LimeTwister on October 08, 2003, 05:42:48 pm

8)

my confussing poem.

Title: Murder
Post by: Tia on October 09, 2003, 01:03:18 pm

Amazing =)

Love the chorus-sy bit lol

Title: Murder
Post by: Layla on October 09, 2003, 01:43:39 pm

*is a psycho, loves psycho things*

Title: Murder
Post by: LimeTwister on October 09, 2003, 03:22:29 pm

Quote from: "Miss T"

Amazing =)

Love the chorus-sy bit lol

yea me too, the verses make no sense...

thanks tia and layla!

Title: Murder
Post by: Tia on October 10, 2003, 03:01:16 am

Quote from: "LimeTwister"

Quote from: "Miss T"

Amazing =)

Love the chorus-sy bit lol

yea me too, the verses make no sense...

thanks tia and layla!

You're very welcome Mr. Limey =P