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Title: "Custody"
Post by: Alecs on June 02, 2003, 10:59:34 pm

Confusion
Disallusion
Afraid of the ultimate conclusion.

I look to my left, then right
I'm looking for comfort but...
none in sight.

Feeling hot, feeling tense,
using my self confidence.
Swimming in the sky &
running over oceans.
I feel my body move
in different motions.

Help me...
Lead me...
Save me...
You have CUSTODY of me.

Alecs

Title: Re: "Custody"
Post by: Tia on June 03, 2003, 02:21:12 am

Quote from: "Alecs"

Swimming in the sky &
running over oceans.

- my fave bit  :D

cool song/poem...

Title: "Custody"
Post by: Ms.Redd on June 03, 2003, 04:07:06 am

Again I like...

Title: thanks guys and gals
Post by: Alecs on June 03, 2003, 08:51:30 am

:)

Title: "Custody"
Post by: sweetdang on June 03, 2003, 12:55:07 pm

Very Good : )

Title: thanks sweetdang
Post by: Alecs on June 03, 2003, 01:42:35 pm

:-)

Title: "Custody"
Post by: Tiger Baby on June 03, 2003, 01:43:14 pm

cool :)

Title: "Custody"
Post by: Mountaineer on June 03, 2003, 01:45:38 pm

Really good. :D