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Title: Deafening Thoughts
Post by: PIBby on April 03, 2004, 03:25:43 pm
What? I don't know why, but I can't understand you.
If you hold on now, I'll run home and clean my conscience again,
Just hold on now.
I died in every place I looked for you, and you were never there.
And I don't know why, but I dont want to understand you.
What you're saying is far too true and revealing for me.
It's these Spring nights when I fall asleep thinking of you,
Because a year ago, I was with you and I was fine.
Let me take some time, and you'll let me say your name again.
Yeah, we can start over. And we'll be fine.
It'll be okay, then, just let me show you.
I don't know why, but I don't want to understand you.
I won't forget you. I'll carve you in the palm of my hand.
You'll always be with the little part of me you've left for me to keep.
I won't forget you.
I won't forget you, when you're gone.
Title: Deafening Thoughts
Post by: c'estlavie on April 04, 2004, 01:17:49 am
wow, u r a seriously good poet. honestly, i love all of the ones uve wrote!

i wish i cud write like u cos this one like all of the others is really touching.

Lisa xxx