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Title: November 12, 2004
Post by: PIBby on November 10, 2004, 06:23:59 pm
You say it's your birthday next week.
Well, I'm sorry, I can't help you.
But sometimes things go wrong and we stay home.

I know I'm an asshole, smart-ass,
And I say more than what fits this room,
But I didn't mean to hurt you.

I finally stopped you and stalled,
But brought it up again.
And you started crying and I held you for a while.

Smoked Friday nights,
When the rain makes everything,
Look like mosaics and sometimes I crumble, too.
Then, it was okay to fall onto you.

Two o'clock on Saturday morning,
Take a hit and fall onto me.
You just turned fifteen.

Your eyes, they're always just so green.
Your hair falls . . . or something,
And you look at me.

I give you a smile and turn around.
I think you know and think the same,
Because I'm too uncomfortable with fire.

Lazy Saturday mornings,
When the rain makes everything,
Look like mosaics and I crumble, too.

I watch your car as it drives off.
I sit alone on the front step.
I promised you a better present.

But you're fifteen.
And I'm sorry your birthday sucked.
Being sad, stoned, and alone . . .
Title: November 12, 2004
Post by: Jophess on November 10, 2004, 06:50:27 pm
That's amazing, Cece.

My stupid PDF converter was being a bitch, but I WOULD have the book ready.
Title: November 12, 2004
Post by: PIBby on November 11, 2004, 12:58:49 pm
Haha

Thanks, Joey
Title: November 12, 2004
Post by: Chloe on November 12, 2004, 05:58:52 pm
omfg that's so good.... i seriously have chills up my back right now....not even exaggerating.
Title: November 12, 2004
Post by: snapple936 on November 16, 2004, 09:23:46 pm
damn good. i always love everything you write. EDIT-nevermind hahaa ;-)  read your pms.
Title: November 12, 2004
Post by: dconfessional on November 17, 2004, 02:21:11 pm
omg! thats so good! I wish I could write that well. That literal.
Course, I do have some poems on here. Just, no one reads them...